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Saturday, March 28, 2015

Stare (Fiction 55)

“Don’t stare like that” she blushed
“Girl, I often feel like…” he said
“Like?”
“Coming closer to you and to hold those manes in my hands …” he added, staring intensely in her curious eyes
“And?” she beamed
“To pull you even closer!”
“Then?”
“Then…bang your head against the wall, you irritating creep!” he screamed!



48 comments:

  1. oops!! what a surprise for her!!

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  2. Well, that escalated quickly!

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    1. Hi Megha

      hahah! Annoying girl drove the guy to creepiness!

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  4. The guy lost his cool too quick ! Well his temperament will not suit the girl !

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    1. Hello Sir,

      Actually the girl is a pest so that's why this ending :)

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  5. Hahaha .. too romantic :P

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  6. You took us by surprise..very well etched, Ankita:)
    Vishal

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    1. Hi Vishal

      Thanks a lot! I am happy you enjoyed it :)

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  7. You spoiled a romantic ending. HaHaHa.

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  8. Ouch!
    Some people actually do this, Ankita.
    Hope we all get loving partners, who'll never even dream of banging our heads!

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    1. Hi Anita

      heheh! some do and some partners are such pests that they drive the other person to the wall! in this fic, the girl is one such creep :)

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  9. That was a surprise, I was not expecting that to happen! ;)
    xoxoxo ♡

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    1. Hi Dianne

      Thanks a lot dear! hehe! :)

      <3

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  10. No... poor girl...
    but sweet nagging can at times be a complete torture!

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    1. Hi Rupasi

      yes, nagging can drive the other person crazy!

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  11. Ooops ooops ... have some patience :p

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  12. The guy definitely needs his head checked up ;(

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  13. I kinda expected the twist. Relieved that I wasn't disappointed. I like it. :-)

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  14. ouch.. good twist :)

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  15. OMG! What was that... I actually felt he was some psychopath, because I was reading those lines just too intensely :)) LOLZ

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    1. Hi Shesha

      Thanks a lot! That is to be interpreted diff by diff people :)

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  16. Hahahah..!!! Lol.. what a hilarious end it is..!!!
    Awesome you are Ankita :)

    Cheers

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    1. Hi Geetika

      heheheh! Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed the post!

      Thanks again :D

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  17. Gosh! Didn't see that coming! Brilliant and hilarious post :D

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    1. Hi Swathi

      heheh! Thanks a lot! I am glad you liked it :D

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  18. Nice climax. Was expecting smthg romantic :D

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    1. Hi Sonali

      Thanks a lot! I am happy you liked it :D

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    2. Scary to say the least

      Geetashree

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