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Sunday, March 15, 2015

I Am

I am
Just another mortal
Thoughtless and naïve
I can fathom no philosophy or secrets of life
Except I live to spend with you each minute
It is all I do covet
That is what
I am



34 comments:

  1. Super. Beautiful diamante poem. Very romantic also.

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    1. Hi SG

      Thanks a lot! I am really glad you liked the poem :)

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  2. This one made me smile...broadly.
    You could make a stone like me romantic!

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    1. Hi Red

      Thanks a lot dear! I am glad :D

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  3. This is hopelessly romantic and I am loving it.

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    1. Hi Saru

      thanks a lot dear :)

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  4. Cute yet touching poem... :) I love it :)

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    1. Hi Arpita

      Thanks a ton! I am so happy you liked it :)

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  5. Awww... Romantic one...

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  6. That's a great one! Thanks for sharing, Ankita!
    Have a good week!

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    1. Hi Katrin

      Thanks a lot dear! Thanks! :)

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  7. That is simply beautiful. :)

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    1. Hi eye in the sky

      Thanks a lot! I am so glad you liked it
      :)

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  8. Romantically Beautiful !

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    1. Hi Ankur

      Thanks a lot! I am happy you enjoyed it :)

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  9. Thats the beauty of life. We might not know what most others do, yet we are unique and we love who we are :-)

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    1. Hi Ashwini

      yes, true. I am really happy you liked the poem :)

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  10. That's such a sweet poem.. the lines are so beautifully written.. :)

    Cheers

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    1. Hi Geetika

      Thanks a lot! I am so happy you enjoyed the poem :)

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    1. Hi Rajesh

      Thanks a lot!! :D

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  12. Very nice and interesting thing to think about!
    Thanks for visiting my blog.
    Have a Beautiful Day!
    Peace :)

    PS. Sorry you had to give up your best bicycle.

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    1. Hi Chandra

      Thanks a lot! I am so happy you enjoyed this :)

      yup :(

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  13. Loved the format of the poem. The essence is beautiful :-)

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    1. Hi Amrit

      Thanks a lot!! I am really glad you liked the poem :)

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  14. Mushy. :P
    But very well written. You have a way with words. :-)

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    1. Hi Kanthu

      Thank you for the lovely compliment! I am glad you liked it :)

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