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Wednesday, March 25, 2015

Shores (Haiku)


Swallow me like hungry tide
So that I can find my shores
In the depths of your love





5-7-5 pattern
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24 comments:

  1. Wow sounds so deeply romantic !

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    1. Hello Sir,

      Thanks a lot! :)

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    1. Hello Nana

      Thanks a lot! :)

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  3. Beautiful writing, Ankita!

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    1. Hi Katrin

      Thanks a lot!! :)

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  4. Very beautiful and very romantic.

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  5. Ajkal ap bahut romatic poem likh rahi hain.. :P

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  6. So full of love and passion ... splendid :-)

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  7. To drench in love filled ocean, thats what we all need:)

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    1. Hi Vandana

      yes true! thanks a lot :)

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  8. So romantic and beautiful dear Ankita.
    hugs
    xoxoxo ♡

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    1. Hi dianne

      Thanks a lot dear! I am so glad you liked it
      :)

      Hugs! <3

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  9. This is powerfully romantic...

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