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Saturday, March 7, 2015

It's Simple!

No,
It’s simple
I am not a sage
I am not a mystic
I can’t tell the future
I will walk till this patch is over
For life has lanes already drawn
I’m just another pawn
I am not a mystic
I am not a sage
It’s simple
No?


 

26 comments:

  1. I liked the circular progression of your poem ... how it starts and ends at the same point ... beautiful :-)

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    1. Hi Amrit

      Thanks a lot!! I am so happy that you liked the poem and its style :D

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  2. Beautiful poem, Ankita.What form is this poem known as ?

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    1. Hello Nana

      Thanks a lot! I am really glad you liked it!
      This style is called 'diamante'

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  3. Beautiful poem! :*

    Is it a Fibonacci Sonnet? The shape is similar to a Fibonacci series.

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    1. Hi Mirage

      Thanks lot dear! I am so glad you liked it :)

      Nah! I just wanted the shape of a diamond so I think the style would be a 'diamante' :)

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  4. That is so cool! Thanks so much for sharing! Great work!

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    1. Hi Katrin

      Thanks a lot! I am so happy that you liked it!! :D

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  5. Nice poem Ankita, well written!! :)

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    1. Hi Charan

      Thanks a lot! I am so happy that you enjoyed it! :)

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  6. i liked the way it has been presented .. especially the word count and all in circular fashion .. :)

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    1. Hi Ankur

      Thanks a lot! I am really happy you liked the presentation!

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  7. A beautiful reflective poem and a lovely image dear Ankita.
    hugs
    xoxoxo ♡

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    1. Hi dianne

      Thanks a ton my dear! I am so happy that you liked it :)

      Hugs! <3

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  8. Beautiful diamante poem. You have carved out a poetic diamond.

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    1. Hi SG

      Thanks a lot for this awesome compliment!! :D

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  9. I love the line..."For life has lanes already drawn...." I believe it too

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    1. Hi Panaecea

      Thanks a lot! I am so happy you liked this line :)

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  10. Quite a soulful! What were you thinking when writing this one? It has a Sufi strain to it.

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    1. Hi Rajesh

      Thanks a lot! I am so happy you liked it :)

      just like that only!

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  11. It looks beautiful...
    And beautifully conveys the truth of life...
    Btw... I am a strong believer of fate and destiny...!

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    1. Hi Loco

      Thanks a lot for the lovely compliment! yes, me too :)

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    1. Hello Sir

      Thanks a lot! I am very happy you liked it :)

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  13. What's life sweet and simple? I would rather have it all messy! Like right now! That would be sweet and simple for me :D and fun too!

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