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Friday, October 24, 2014

Haiku Horizons- Release


This is for Haiku Horizons and this week's prompt is 'Release


Hungry waves guzzle
Letters grimy with deceit
Old pain released.



Rustic cage opened
Dismal eyes glitter in hope
Released wings cheer!


*Image from: www.pixgood.com
*5-7-5 syllable pattern


21 comments:

  1. The release wings will cheer always :-)

    But how can we ever cope up with deceit :-(

    Loved both the haiku.

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    1. Hi Amrit

      Yes, freedom is the most precious thing!

      but we have to, we can't live with -vity all life.

      Thanks a ton!!

      :)

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  2. Beautiful. Loved the first one more :)

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  4. Two different types of releases.
    Nice ones, Ankita!

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    1. Hi Anita

      Thanks a lot! I am really glad you liked them!

      :)

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  5. The last line is the best, released wings are a sign for beautiful life full of freedom!! :)

    All the best Ankita,
    Take care :)

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    1. Hi Sai

      Thanks a lot! I am happy that you liked the lines :)


      Thanks!

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  6. Love them! Thanks for sharing!

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    1. Hi Katrin

      Thanks a lot! I am really glad you enjoyed the Haiku :)

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  7. liked the expression 'letters grimy with deceit'... 2 good 'releases' !! ;)

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  8. Hi Vaga

    so ur r back from Himalaya trip! how was it?? Do post some awesome pics!

    Thanks a lot! I am glad that you enjoyed the haiku :)

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  9. I loved it....the last line was so beautiful.

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  10. They paint such a pretty picture both the verses :)

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    1. Hi Soumya

      Thanks a ton! I am happy that you liked the Haiku :)

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  11. Both the haiku are lovely.
    About pain and freedom from it...
    Nice

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    1. Hi Locomente

      Thanks a ton! I am really glad you liked both :D

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    1. Hello Maam

      Thanks a lot! I am really glad you liked them :)

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