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Friday, August 28, 2015

Shivers

Clinched fists defy that smile of yours
And your cheer veils a certain wrath
Behind those eyes, those sparkling ones
I can read some hushed up words
Unspoken but not unfathomed
They perch as grim clouds black,
Sending shivers down my back


18 comments:

  1. spooky......................................

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  2. Lovely poem Ankita ! Powerful meaningful and rhyming !

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    1. Hello Sir,

      Thanks a lot! I am really glad you enjoyed it :)

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  3. Wonderfully written, Ankita!

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    1. Hi Katrin

      Thanks a ton mein lieben :)

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  4. Nice poem. Very well written.

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  5. Excellent...very lucidly portrayed

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    1. Hi vanderloost

      Thanks a ton!! I am so happy that you liked the poem :)

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  6. This is an amazing poem...short and sensational!

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  7. Wow! Reminds me of the feelings I get if I ever get acquainted by someone who is either a stranger or does not keep good intentions towards me.

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    1. Hi Ph_

      Thanks a lot! I am happy that you can relate with the poem :)

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  8. This poem sent shivers within me too :)

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