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Tuesday, September 23, 2014

Haiku Horizons- Space

This is for Haiku Horizons and this week's prompt is 'Space'



Dissolve in my beats, and
Into the spaces amid my lips
Calm the tempest within


Urban beast savors
Open space, sacrificed
On concrete altars  




22 comments:

  1. Great set of images here! I especially like concrete altars (the image, not the reality)

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    1. Hi Oneofaclass

      Thanks a ton! I am really that you enjoyed the Haiku :)

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  2. You are such a great writer, Ankita! <3 Thanks for sharing!

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  3. sacrificed on concrete altars is quite a powerful image ----

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    1. Hi blogitorloseit

      Thanks a lot!

      :D

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  4. Both the haiku r way diff from each other.. But both are equally nice..

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    1. Hi Megha

      Thanks a ton dear :D

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  5. The first two lines ... just wow :D

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  6. Those concrete altars are quite voracious, aren't they?

    Desolate Space

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  7. Wow! Powerful imagery. Nice work.

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  8. true so true concrete jungles are coming up everywhere ...

    Bikram

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