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Friday, November 14, 2014

Two Cinquains

Time
Eternal, Constant
Progresses, Rewards, Punishes
Loose Sand in Fist
Power

Lion
Majestic, Moody
Roars, Mauls, Rules
Law of the Jungle
King 


37 comments:

  1. That is so true... Like a lion, isn't time the king of our lives?
    Btw learnt aboout another form of poetry from your blog!!!

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    1. Hi Shesha

      Thanks a lot!! indeed :)

      That's a wonderful compliment :D Vielen danke!

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  2. Great! Thanks for sharing, Ankita! Have a great weekend!

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    1. Hi Katrin

      Thanks a lot!! same to you meine lieben :D

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  3. Lovely, Ankita :) Aptly described in such few words.
    I have the same point as Shesha!
    Time is the King of our life. Lion is the King of the Jungle.

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    1. Hi Anita

      Thanks a lot! yes, Indeed :)

      I am glad you enjoyed this post :)

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  4. Very interesting presentation of time and lion in a few words. I was thinking of some additional words for time such as money and flies, Lion is also ferocious. I enjoyed this thought provoking post., Best wisher.

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    1. Hi Joseph


      Thanks a lot! Those words are nice too! I should have used 'ferocious', I would have looked much better infact !

      I am glad you enjoyed this post :)

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    2. It* would have looked

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  5. Ah so true. Love your creativity :-)

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    1. Hi WritingForLife

      Thanks a ton!

      Thanks a lot! That is a wonderful compliment :D
      I am happy that you enjoyed this post :)

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  6. They are nice but I liked lion best

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    1. Hello KP nana

      Thanks a lot!! :D

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  7. I have been loving your blog. :)

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    1. Hi Red

      Thank youuu! <3

      And I love yours :D

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    1. Hi Megha

      Thanks a lot! I am happy you enjoyed this post :)

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  9. Beautiful. Time - Don't wait for nobody. (american grammar)

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    1. Hi SG

      Thanks a ton!! yes, that's a cool saying in funky grammar!

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  10. Time and lion ... both rulers in their own ways :-)

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    1. Hi Amrit

      thanks! yes, true :)

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  11. You know I like the spaces. Its so much abouy how we choose to connect these dots. Says so much about us.
    Lion made me happy.

    Beautiful blog :)
    Take care.
    x

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    1. Hi TPA

      Thanks a lot! I am really happy that you enjoyed the Cinquains :)

      Thanks again! :D

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  12. Very good attempt! Like it so much :)

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    1. Hi Jeevan

      Thanks a lot! I am really glad you enjoyed the post :)

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  13. wow! this was so unique :). Great to find ur blog!

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    1. Hi Prateek

      Thanks a lot for such a lovely compliment :)

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  14. lovely cinquains... keep them coming Ankita :)

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  15. Wow... Love this...creative style of writing!

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    1. Hi Aditi

      Thanks a lot! I am happy you liked the post :)

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  16. I was not aware of this form...
    Thanks for introducing me to it...
    And, this looks great!

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    1. Hi Locomente

      Thanks a lot! I am really glad you enjoyed it!

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  17. Lose sand in fist - power...you had it all there! :)

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    1. Hi Vaisakhi

      Thanks a ton! I am so glad you liked the poem :)

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