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Wednesday, November 19, 2014

Coldness

This coldness in your eyes
It haunts me day and night
     Pursed lips and harsh stares
Silence, as bitter as a curse


This coldness in your eyes
Is enough for me to realize
That pain is what I gained
My prize in your fav game

This coldness in your eyes
Makes my heart rip in sighs
See, what I’ve got in your love
Murk within and darkness above




48 comments:

  1. gosh this is pure emotion... beautiful truth and sadness all wrapped up together.

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    1. Hi kayla

      Thanks a lot! Thanks for making my day!! :D

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  2. Beautiful words..loved it Ankita :)

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    1. Hi Renu

      Thanks a lot! I am so happy you liked it :D

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  3. heart breaking poem.. but beautifully written..

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    1. Hi Megha

      Thanks a lot! I am so glad you liked it :)

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  4. Pain and heartbreak is wonderfully conveyed...
    It re-emphasises that love carries pain with it... Like how rose carries thorns!

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    1. Hi Locomente

      Thanks a lot for this wonderful compliment! I am so happy that you enjoyed its essence :)

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  5. Nice one. May be you mistook his/her conjunctivitis as coldness in the eye! (attempted humor).

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    1. Hi SG

      Thank you :)

      hahaha! that would be heat in eyes, this is coldness! :)

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  6. good thing is winter doesnt last forever :D

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    1. Hi deeps

      yes, times is always on a move :)

      Thanks!

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  7. "Silence as bitter as a curse..." that is what kills us the most from the people we love!!!

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    1. Hi Shesha

      yes, silence of friends hits more sharply than words of the enemies.

      Thanks!

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  8. Cold behavior is the worst form of punishing someone. I can handle anything but coldness for me in somebody's eyes.

    Nicely put!

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    1. Hi Mirage

      exactly, it hurts very deeply. same for me as well.

      Thanks!!

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  9. Beautiful, Ankita! You are such a great writer!

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    1. Hi Katrin

      Dhanyawaad! I am so happy you liked it :)

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  10. hi,
    really great word to appreciate the coldness..by seeing the lines i am on to it
    with cheers
    rose@q8living.com

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    1. Hi Rose

      Thanks a ton! I am so glad that you liked the poem :)

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  11. Ohhh... haven't come across many dark stuff on this blog. Good attempt though, had me sinking in despair ! ;)

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    1. Hi Vaga Bond

      thanks! I am happy you liked this poem :D

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  12. Hello, greetings. Lovely thought provoking poem.

    Coldness is a dangerous weapon and as you said it haunts, it pains and it makes you sigh.

    Best wishes

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    1. Hello Joseph

      Greetings!

      Thanks a lot! I am so happy that you liked the poem :)

      yes, I agree. It cuts deeply.

      Thanks :)

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  13. I hate such relationships... :(
    It rebels against humanity!

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  14. It hurts when you have cold eyes looking back at you :-(

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    1. Hi Amrit

      yes, it hurts very much :(

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  15. Wonderfully written :-)

    Just like how people say its better to get scolded when someone is angry with us, rather than giving the cold treatment, which is way more painful!

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    1. Hi Ashwini

      Thanks a lot!!!

      yes, coldness hurts very deeply and for a long time.

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  16. Hi, Ankita! This is some very beautiful writing. Thank you so much for sharing.

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    1. Hi OE

      Thanks a lot. I am glad you liked this poem :)

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  17. Lovely words, Ankita.
    Hope no one has to be a victim of 'coldness'.
    We want our world to be a warm place!

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    1. Hi Anita

      Thanks a lot!! yes, it is very painful, a true punishment in fact.

      :)

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  18. Oh, that hurts. :(

    Beautifully written.

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    1. Hi Saru

      yes, very much :(

      Thanks a lot :)

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  19. Hi..This is my first visit to your blog. Glad that I came here, very beautifully written, even as a reader I could feel the coldness of ignorance though your poem. Keep writing :)

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    1. Hi Mustaf

      Thanks a lot for the beautiful words of appreciation. i am so glad that you liked the blog and this post! keep coming :)

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  20. Some powerful and intense emotions at work here. Heart-break does seem to open all doors to let such coldness in. Either we shut all the doors and windows or we let the fire within burn high and bright. Beautifully penned. :)

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    1. Hi Enigma

      Thanks a lot! I am so happy that you liked this poem :)

      very true, love can be painful at times

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  21. So intense....
    Touched my ♥

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    1. Hi Akshitha

      Thanks a lot!!! :)

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