The pain..the unwanted void.Captured well!
Hi RedThanks a lot, I am really happy the verses touched you :)
Love them. You are such a good writer!
Hi KatrinDanke! That's an awesome compliment :D
Let's embrace the void, it's the empty spot from where Light emerges <3
Hi Ander Ka HaalVery true! I agree :)<3
Such haunting words, Ankita. This one hurts... You have written the Haiku so beautifully.
Hi AThanks dear for such lovely compliment :D
heart felt words and hurtful picture!!!
Hi Ph_Thanks dear. I am really glad you liked the Haiku :)
Hey, why write of pain? God bless.
Hi RajeshJust like that, this prompt fitted well into these thoughts :)
Why a bit distressed.The haiku are nice.
Hi rudraprayagNot at all! These are just random takes on the prompt :)Thanks a lot!
I can relate to the 1st one ... I too feel the same on Monday mornings :p
Hi AmritThanks a lot! heheh :P
The pain of being so alone...and to bear it every day. Nicely expressed.
Hi Belooyes, this pain corrodes the heart the whole life. Thank you!
oh that is sadddddddddd... :( i wish and pray no child has to go through that Bikram
Hi BikramAs i saw Birmingham on live traffic feed widget, I knew you are on this blog! heheh!Yes, very sad but the worst part is the attitude of other people who decline to extend a loving hand.
The motherless child...I can't help but think of all the children fleeing the violence in Guatemala, and making their way alone across Mexico to cross into the United States...Down a Steep Decline
Hi Markyes, that is very tragic.
Hi OnkarThanks a ton !
Thats really sad and heart breaking!Very tough on the child!
Hi Locomenteyes, very tough indeed.
These are touching and beautiful. The second one brought to mind Rock Me To Sleep by Jill Sobule.
Hi rabbiThank you! I'll look up that song on youtube :)
I liked both but second more
Hello KP sirThanks a lot!
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Hi MMTThanks a ton! I have done it, please check :)
Reading this made me sad. It's a sign of a good writer, drawing in the reader.
Hi JudieOh! This is such a nice compliment, thank you for it!:)
welcome ankita to recuerda mi corazon and haiku my heart, we are all so pleased to have you join us! your haiku are haunting...your writing stunning. i will look forward to fridays and your return!
Hi rebeccaThanks a lot!! I am really so glad that you liked these Haiku! I am so proud to be associated with your portal :)
Oh wow, these broke my heart! All the best to you -
Hi blogitorloseitThanks a lot! I am so glad you liked them :DThanks and same to you!!
Beautifully done Ankita, your words left a lump in my throat, esp the second Haiku..
HI ReshmaThanks a ton! I am glad that the second Haiku touched you
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