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Tuesday, October 22, 2013

Dog Trilogy!

I am a big dog lover and I believe dogs are the best creation of God! These three 55 fictions deal with various shades of canine love :)

  My Son!
A Mercedes stopped and old suitcases, his late wife's photo along with his frail self were kicked out. He requested with painful eyes but the black window glasses rose up in arrogance. The car sped away, leaving only dust, behind which he saw that furry tail wagging lovingly. Chocking in throat, he cried ‘my son!’   

 Buddy!
 Again, as he entered after a tiring day, the silence was haunting. Two sullen women pottering around like black clouds ready to burst! He knew of their daily drama hence avoided his mother and wife’s dirty fights and constant grumblings. Pretending to sleep till dinner; lying alone cuddling his dog, he muttered...
‘oh buddy!’

 Mammaaa...
The girl was mere a hideous worm or dirty baggage for ‘nai mummy’ whom papa was much enamored with. Weeping alone all afternoon, she pressed a photograph to her chest and recalled evenings’ playing with her mother in park. It entered excitedly holding her ball in its jaw. Hugging her dog tightly she cried ‘mammaaa’!  
('nai' means new)

 "Heaven is the place where all the dogs go"
                                       --Anonymous
Can't agree more!

32 comments:

  1. 3 nice stories. Thanks. Happiness is a warm puppy.

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  2. Hi SG

    Thank you! yes, indeed..puppies are real angels!

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  3. Without speaking a word, pets understand us better than people at times...loved all the 55ers.

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  4. All the three are good but I liked the first more.It was touching.

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  5. Awwwwww all of them are beautiful!!!! <3

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  6. First one is best..brings a smile:)

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  7. Hi Reshma

    Yes! that's why dogs are our best buddies :)

    Thank you!!

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  8. Hello KP Sir

    Thank you!
    :)

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  9. Hi Veganmiam

    Thanks a lot!!

    :D

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  10. Hi Renu

    Thanks a lot!

    :)

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  11. I go head over heels for any LAB-Puppy. Ok lets not be partial, I love all puppies :).

    On a different note, I noticed(Or may be its just my feeling) that kids usually love pets more than us but when we lose someone or something dear to us or when we become lonely we tend to develop a strong bond with our pets. I still could not figure out why we tend to share our feelings openly with pets. Is it that they listen without expressing anything or is it that pets dont have expectations? Anyways I do have a lot of pets and it becomes very difficult for me to deal if atleast one of them leaves me.

    By the way all your 3 55ers reflect that you miss somebody very badly in life. May you find peace.Keep spreading happiness.

    P.S I love the smile on the kitten's face :)
    [Mummyyyyyyy :( Ankita stole my fav pic from my PC. It belongs to me. Uaan Uaaaan. Mammaa,tell her to give it back to me. ]
    *smirk**smirk*

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  12. Beautiful and poignant too!

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  13. Loved all the 3 stories..Short and quite emotional..Dogs are really the best buddies.. :D

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  14. Hi allresourceupdates

    Thank you! I am glad u liked the stories..yup, no creature is better than a doggy :)

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  15. Ankita...it is beautiful. Loved it soo much esp the first one...really well written.
    I truly believe it is better to invest in dogs than human beings n their fake relations.

    www.numerounity.com

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  16. Hi Anon

    I love puppies too :)

    Ya, I too find it easier to connect to animals b'coz I feel they are non-judgmental and of course do not indulge in dirty politics like our educated friends do..that's why, a dog is the best buddy :)

    U are not wrong..I agree I do...thank you for the wishes :)

    I love this kitten too..this pic always makes me happy!

    heheh! that's sweet :)

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  17. Hi Ekta

    Thanks you very much! I am really happy you liked it!

    yes, I agree that's why I love dogs so much :)

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  18. Pets are the best. I can't even tell you how happy my pets make me. They cheer me up when I am sad, they are always there for me, they understand...

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  19. Hi Katrin

    Yes, absolutely! That's why I just love animals esp dogs :D

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  20. The best friends of all!

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  21. Hi Indrani

    Yes, indeed!

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  22. its lovely... really refreshed by the ideas and posting them in jus 55 words..:)

    keep writing..!!

    Cheers,
    Urvashi

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  23. Hi Urvashi

    Thanks a ton! I am really happy you liked it!

    :D

    Keep coming!

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  24. Beautiful and Touching. I am a canine lover too and can't agree with you more! Love

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  25. Hi Geetashree!

    Thanks a lot!!

    I am very happy that you liked it!

    :D

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  26. Dogs anytime..cats..can't stand them :)

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  27. Hi Nihar

    Yes! I love dogs but I love cats too!

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  28. So lovely! I'm a big dog fan too.

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  29. Hi ladyfi

    Thank you!

    :)

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  30. I am an animal lover too and this post touched my heart, you captured the scene with words with vivid description.

    The best thing about animals(dogs,cats, rabbits, etc) is their innocence, honesty and loyalty - that's how they easily become best friends forever!!

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  31. Hi Sai

    Thank you!! I am so happy that you liked this post :)

    Yes, they are so loyal and loving. unlike human love, theirs is unconditional and unlimited :)

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