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Wednesday, October 5, 2011

We will meet

Like a true companion
Your memoirs never leave me alone
However hard I may attempt
I witness circus* with a subtle contempt
I sauté in dark solitude
I burn out like a flame
I smile half-heartedly
I cease to think; everyone is the same
That fire within me is still ablaze
This lights my path in the entire maze
We will meet somewhere in high pastures
Where time does not prevail
Where life is but a passed stage


*world

34 comments:

  1. nice - one
    बढ़िया अंदाज ||
    बहुत बहुत बधाई ||

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  2. A moving piece that touches the heart

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  3. hello Ravikar

    thanks a lot!

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  4. It happens.. Like this.. The wait itself is endless.. I like this poem..
    I would come back to read it again..

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  5. hii KP

    thanks a ton!!

    :)

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  6. hii Adityasaravana

    yes, u got it.

    Thanks and yes do come :)

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  7. love is a wonderful thing.. joy in our heart it will bring !

    Weakest LINK

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  8. hii Rachit!

    wah wah :)

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  9. "Where life is but a passed stage".... Really can't wait till then... Loved the emotions. :)

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  10. hii Juxta!

    thanks a ton!!

    :D

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  11. very nice?
    so where are we all meeting?
    its such a touching piece of poem..
    blended well and served with Nice Aroma
    :)

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  12. two soul mates waiting to unite in the eternal world...what else should they care for...This is good...:)

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  13. hii Harman!

    thanks a ton for this lovely comment :)

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  14. hii mohan

    thanks a lot

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  15. hii Rajlakshmi

    thanks a lot!!

    :D

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  16. hello Sankoobaba!

    thanks a lot!

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  17. You pretty much said what i could not effectively communicate. +1

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  18. hello Anon

    thanks a lot!!

    :)

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  19. we will meet..where time does not prevail...oooof...super yar..real good..and hey i also hope v real meet one day..insha allah..:) and thanks for being sucha good friend:)

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  20. hii Ramesh


    thanks a ton for this lovely compliment :D

    inshallah!

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  21. short n impressive....
    Memories are always a true companion.

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  22. hello Irfannudin

    yes, thanks a ton!

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  23. keeping that fir burning is half the battle won ...

    excellent loved reading it ..


    Bikram's

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  24. hii Bikram

    thanks a lot for this lovely comment :)

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  25. Poetry always has the power of expressing something much much deeper with all the un-said words than it usually does with all the words which are actually present there.

    Beautiful, Deep and Heavy are the words I would like to use for your expression here.

    Sometimes the irony of life is too powerful to be won but hope and faith makes us do wonders in life. :)

    Thanks for letting us read such nice hearts touching and emotion evoking lines.

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  26. Hello Asif,

    Thanks a ton!

    yes, that the wonder of verse..

    keep coming :)

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  27. Very beautiful and touching poem. Each and every lines are superb.

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  28. hii Babli!

    thanks a lot!!

    :)

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  29. lief is like that :)

    nice poem

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  30. hii Deeps

    yes..

    thanks :)

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