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Tuesday, December 7, 2010

LIKE...

Like an oasis in the desert
Like cool breeze in hot summers

Like a thousand roses in full bloom
Like a swish of sweet perfume
 
Like a pure drop of dew
Like a flower bud new

Like innocent chirping of birds
Like tiny bells of cattle heard

Are my innocent feelings for you
For pure love gives life a rosy hue!

(I wrote this poem long back but I am posting it now)

22 comments:

  1. Wonderful...
    its a lovely poem..keep writing!!
    :)

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  2. hii Harman

    thanks a lot!
    keep coming :D

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  3. lovey-dovey .. sweet-sweet.. good one~

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  4. hii Sankoobaba

    hehe! thanks a lot :D

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  5. Lovely! I can almost visulaize everything... Love the thousand roses in full bloom. They are red - right?!

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  6. hii NRI Girl

    thanks a ton!
    yup, red indeed :)

    keep coming :)

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  7. Swish of perfume- lovely lyric.

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  8. Hello Jagdish

    thanks a lot!

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  9. Liked the poem and the image
    are those Gebra's Sorry if i have spelt it wrong ...


    Bikram's

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  10. hii Saurav

    thanks a lot!
    keep coming :D

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  11. hii Bikramjit

    thanks a lot!
    keep coming :D

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  12. Nice Poem. It reflects something thats is Pure and rare.

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  13. Hii Rahul

    thanks a lot :D

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  14. hii Jingle

    thanks a lot!

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  15. Nice, melodious and lyrical one.

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  16. Hello Mr Jagdish bali

    thanks a lot!

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  17. Short, simple and sweet :)

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  18. hii Sh@s

    thanks a ton!!

    :D

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  19. hi Anon

    thanks a lot!

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