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Tuesday, September 7, 2010

The True Saviour




While taking a stroll outside
Praising the deep, dark but starry night
Cool breeze, bright stars and the lovely moonlight
Like molten silver dripping from misty skies

When a painful cry caught my attention,
A tiny plant it was and to the ground it had fallen
Separated in one stroke, from its brethren

I decided to let it suffer not
But planted it in a new earthen pot

In a few days, it regained its sheen
From dull yellow to fresh green
Its joy could be easily seen





“You seem hale now I see,
Feel obliged forever and  be grateful to me”
Said I, swelling with pride and vanity.
With a mystic smile said he
“Though thankful I am to you but grateful only to Thee”

“But I saved your life, so why not just me? "
“Coz you were sent by Him only
The true savior of all beings is almighty
The good God lets no being suffer lonely”
Pat came his crisp reply with a meaning deep to imply

God helps all of us in the hour of need
For world is a rosary, every being but a bead
To His divine abode we all must proceed
With faces smiling and hearts without ego and greed.

14 comments:

  1. beautiful and thoughtful. :)

    my fav lines
    Like molten silver dripping from misty skies
    For world is a rosary, very being but a bead

    and nice pic too:)

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  2. Nice one. God comes and helps but not directly. He helps through someone else. That is why there is this saying: Dheivam Manushya Roopena (God in the form of a human being.)

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  3. So true, and an amazing narration. A wonderful lesson learnt from a wonderful incident.

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  4. hii Wise
    thanks a ton!
    this actually happened a few days back, now that plant is again set in a new jar :)

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  5. hii SG

    thanks a lot! yes, every one who helps someone is need is an angel send by god only.

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  6. hii BA

    thanks a ton! i am so glad u liked the poem :)

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  7. hii BA

    thanks a ton! i am so glad u liked the poem :)

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  8. hii Abhinav

    thanks a ton!

    :D

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  9. nice poem AS
    I liked the word tiny plant..when i actually imagined..a tiny one..
    cute poem i should say!

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  10. hii Unknown!!!

    thanks a lot! yes it was a very tin play when the 'gamla' broke and I put it in another one :)

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  11. sorry 'tiny plant'

    typo error :P

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  12. excellent,. really mind blowing stuff,. beautifully written,. every word seems to be a gem. God has blessed you with some amazing writing skills., you are a genius.,

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  13. Hi Veeravista

    Thanks a lot for the awesome compliment!! M am really happy that u liked the poem :)

    Keep coming!!

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