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Sunday, December 6, 2009

Fiction 55 no. 3

Since poor and illiterate, they wondered why their anemic teenage daughter fainted frequently.

Thus they went to a famous ‘tantrik baba’ who announced she was possessed.Baba took their semi-conscious daughter to a dark room for ‘treatment’. They were relieved that the evil spirit was gone.

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But only she knew what else she had lost.....

20 comments:

  1. This one is the best of them all!

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  2. hii Abhinav!

    thanks a ton buddy!

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  3. this is well said and well written.

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  4. now yu going gooood!!..cya around..wher yu these days

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  5. @ AS

    55 words speaking so well and so much!

    Great attempt in drawing our attention to a very cunning act of the society's dirty superstition!


    Keep the spark Alive..

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  6. hii Sorcerer :)

    thanks a ton!

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  7. hii hary!

    thanks a lot! m here only! where r u buddy?

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  8. hii Rachana

    ya yaar! this is very common in rural India, its a dirty reality...only education and awareness can bring a positive change :)

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  9. hii sis :)

    thanks a ton !!

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  10. hii Newbie!

    thanks a lot :)

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  11. hiii Jagjit!

    thanks buddy!
    where r u these dayz??

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  12. A.S,

    Becoming better post by post !! Good one :). and,on a social subject too.

    Btw, are the last lines included in the fiction post ?

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  13. hii Prashant
    thanks a lot buddy! yaa! just tried .... m so glad u liked it :)
    yaa! last line is the crux..

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  14. Superstition & Child molestation...bah..two intense topics to cover in a small fiction...good read A S :)

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  15. hii Mohammad

    welcome to my blog :)

    thanks a lot :)

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