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Sunday, February 28, 2016

Mirage


Enthralled by your friendly smile

I inched closer to you every time

Spectral voices confirmed love;

I did feel something of the same

But as I leaned against your heart

 Saw each beat resounded her name



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18 comments:

  1. That must have hurt..great poem :)

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    1. Hi Wanderer

      Thanks a ton dear! :)

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  2. Oh.. Nooo

    that is sad .. But then love can be like that .. it is not necessary that the one we love has to love us back ...

    Bikram's

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    1. Hi Bikram

      yup sometimes we can take care or friendliness for real love.

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  3. Beautiful anticipation in your words but sad that his heartbeat resounded her name not yours...
    Hugs
    xoxoxo ♡

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    1. Hi dianne

      Thanks a lot dear! I am glad you liked this poem :)

      hugs xoxo <3

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  4. That sucks! But the thoughts are very well expressed!

    Cheers

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  5. Painful! Very well written.

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  6. As i read through the poem, I could see a girl falling down in love, but the ending was tragic and painful.

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    1. Hi Vandana

      Thanks a lot for this lovely compliment!

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