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Wednesday, May 6, 2015

You Averred...


You averred your verses were penned for me
That I was the beam in your nights black
But, whenever I called you with a plea,
Love, I could only see your back...





24 comments:

  1. Powerful! Some things are not meant to be forgiven. I hope she walks away now too.

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    1. Hi Soumya

      Thanks a lot! yes, she must walk away too :)

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  2. Really nice.. Action speaks louder than words... :)

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    1. Hi Megha

      Thanks a lot! Very true :)

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  3. Thank god she has realized what he is.Her thoughts are portrayed so well in four lines.

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    1. Hello Nana

      Thanks a lot! I am happy you liked these verses :)

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  4. Love your poem, a great image too, I used the same image a while back for one of my poems.
    Yes, words have no meaning when they are not sincere.
    xoxoxo ♡

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    1. Hi Dianne

      Thanks a lot dear! I am so happy that you liked the poem!!

      Is it? same pinch then :D

      very true :)

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    2. The title of my poem was < a href = "http://hereismyheart-dianne.blogspot.com.au/2011/11/each-time-we-must-part.html">.
      xoxoxo

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    3. Thanks dear! I read it and it is a beautiful poem :)

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    4. Thank you dear Ankita, I am pleased you found it, the automatic link did not work.
      xoxoxo ♡

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  5. Beautifully written, Ankita. Thanks so much for sharing!

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    1. Hi Katrin

      Thanks a lot! :D

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  6. Very well written. That is his loss.

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    1. Hi SG

      Thanks a lot! Indeed :)

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    1. Hello Sir,

      Thanks a lot!!

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  8. loss may be again

    God bless you!
    Immanuel

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  9. An aching heart's words................

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  10. You said so much in just a few words ... powerful and beautiful :-)

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