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Wednesday, April 1, 2015

Fire

You were frosty winter
Frozen, inert and pale
Till I peered and saw
The flames in your eyes
The fire in your breath




34 comments:

  1. Very nice... In love with ur choice of words...

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    1. Hi Loco

      Thanks a lot! That is such a lovely compliment :D

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  2. Ohh!! This was so powerful! :)

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  3. That's so good, Ankita!

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  4. It lends itself to many interpretations.Very nicely written.

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    1. Hello Nana


      Thanks a lot! That is a nice compliment! :)

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  5. Fantastic compo Ankita :)

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    1. Hi Jeevan

      Thanks a lot ! I am happy you liked it :)

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  6. I loved these lines... Beautifully penned Ankita! :)

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    1. Hi Shesha

      Thanks a lot! I am really so glad that you liked these lines :)

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  7. This is one of your best ... magical, powerful and full of passion.

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    1. Hi Amrit

      Thanks a ton for the awesome compliment :D :D

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  8. nice choices of words :)

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  9. Nice choice of words Ankita :) Loved it :)

    Double Jeopardy

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    1. Hi Vanderloost

      Thanks a lot! :)

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  11. Perfect. SO much more here than just a season...

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    1. Hi Shadow

      Thanks a lot!! I am glad you liked it :)

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  12. Deep down emotions are something else, the real heart has something else to say and on the top everything seems so calm.

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    1. Hi Vandana

      yes, very true :)

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  13. That I thought...was beautiful!

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    1. Hi blogoratti

      Thanks a lot!! :D

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