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Monday, May 30, 2011

WAIT FOR ME


I struggle in this pitch dark night
On a sordid journey called life

Living alone on a grave of ardour
Mere memories now my heart harbors

Running far from all ugly cacophony
All I long is your sweet symphony that,
You will be humming for me waiting,
Beyond the stars where time has no meaning
Where death is myth and soul is the living

Where only love and calm prevails
No vexation, desolation or anymore heartbreaks

Strolling universe, we shall go beyond the sun
Far from any sects to follow, any galleys* to return

Hold my hand, let me seep deep inside
Contain me within yourself somewhere, let me hide

It is my only pleasure pure, my only bliss divine
Please, be inseparable, remain forever mine

Wait for me near that pearly, pristine full moon
Enjoy agony of longing; I shall arrive soon




* 'Galleys'  here indicates society and rules.

31 comments:

  1. Soooo moving. My hands fail to write anything.

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  2. hii SG
    welcome back!

    thanks a lot :)

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  3. Beautiful, emotional and meaningful....

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  4. hii Alka

    thanks a lot

    :)

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  5. hii Rachit

    thanks a lot

    :)

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  6. Well written ... u've gone to the next level :)

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  7. hii mOhan!

    thanks a ton buddy!
    u remember i said these things are not planned when we were discussing writing poems.

    All of a sudden it came and i penned it down :)

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  8. Nice lines capturing the sentiment expressed.

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  9. Hello KParthasarathi

    Welcome here!

    thanks a lot :)

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  10. Beautiful,touched my heart .

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  11. hii Kavita

    thanks a ton!!

    :)

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  12. The poem dangles between two phases, one where the loved is waiting to hold lover's hands and listen to his soothing lull and then, as if the lover's already there, asks him to wait for a while and burn in agony. Much like a reply to the wait of the latter.

    Nice read.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  13. hii BA

    thanks a ton!

    i loved the way u analysed the poem, lovely :)

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  14. powerful and emotional...
    great work

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  15. hii Sankoobaba

    thanks a ton!
    m happy u liked the poem :)

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  16. Lovely poem it has such an incredible quality to it a bit mystical. Touching

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  17. hii mindlovemisery

    Thanks a ton!!

    keep coming!

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  18. and you will go back.
    :-)

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  19. wow, what a fantastic piece.
    thrilled to see you in,

    impressive entry.

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  20. I especially loved the last line.

    Great poem! Nicely done.

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  21. hii Bryce

    thanks a ton!

    :)

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  22. you impress us.


    Short Story Slam Week 4 is still open for submission,
    Come on in,
    We love your creativity/talent…
    Happy Thursday!
    Love & hugs.
    xoxox

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  23. To be frank, I just clicked the title as I liked the title, the beautiful picture and the combination of both :). But when I finished reading the lines, I was left breathless with a zillion thoughts in my heart. Yes, the emotions and feelings you expressed are so real and so deep that I became a big fan of your emotions and feelings. A person who can express the pain and agony of life in such intricate details is always beautiful. I’m really happy to have stumbled upon this particular post which has a lot to say and which touches our hearts so deeply. The essence of Pure Love!
    The words still lingering in my heart are
    “...my only bliss divine...remain forever mine”

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  24. Hello Asif

    welcome here!

    thanks a ton for this lovely compliment :)

    this poem is very special to me, I wrote it for someone who is no more now.

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  25. Yes I understood your feelings. I felt like writing about the line
    "I shall arrive soon"
    but then I didn't want spoil the beauty of the flow.

    I'm sorry to have reminded you about it.
    Keep Smilimg :)

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  26. hello Asif,

    please feel free to express your views here :)

    yaa, the other world is far better than this one, so m rather happy.

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  27. Nice poem and it transfers one to another world.

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  28. Hi Vandana

    Thanks a lot!!

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