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Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Doll - House



A house
Old and abandoned
Where only quiet reigns
Still echoes its happy past
When once cheers resounded all around
Childhood doll-house that still makes me smile!


Written for Mag 285

28 comments:

  1. memories always makes us happy , nicely writen

    My take : A Small Home

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    1. Hi Cifar

      yes! Thanks a lot :)

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    1. Hi rudraprayaga

      Thanks a lot :)

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  3. Ahhh. Sweet Memories.

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  4. At least they are good memories

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  5. Childhood memories are the best...

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  6. "Still echoes its happy past." - nice line!

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  7. Memories make any place alive no ?
    Nicely penned

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    1. Hi Afshan

      Indeed! Thanks a lot :)

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  8. Lovely verse ! Is this old well preserved doll house Ankita ?

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    1. Hello Sir,

      Thank you! No, this is not my doll house but a writing prompt provided by Magpie Tales :)

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  9. childhood memories are alway precious and bring smile to us.

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  10. Nice one Ankita. Made me remember my doll :). Do visit my blog sometime. It will be a pleasure for me.
    (alkadimrisaklani.blogspot.in )

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    1. Hi Alka

      Thanks a lot :)
      Sure :)

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  11. That is so nicely done Ankita and so well narrated.. the tale of an old doll house and the beauty it had in its reign..!

    Cheers

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  12. Well written Ankita!! Happy memories can always be breathed back to life and brought into the present to make you smile even more :) What I mean is if you still have your doll house intact at home, re-paint and re-decorate it and save it for the future and may be a decade from now, you can present it to your daughter so she can play with it!! You'll be able to re-live your childhood memories by watching her.

    Good poem,
    Cheers,
    Sai :)

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    1. Hi Sai

      Thanks a lot! :D

      yes, happy memories are hard to forget. Sure! that is indeed a rocking idea!

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