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Saturday, February 11, 2012

Thanks Fi!

This is inspired by Princess Fiona's works. Thanks Fi for motivating me to try something really creative like this!


Vast
Space filled
Universe, I wonder
If I am , a part of the
Ever flowing river; sitting in
My own reverie, I ponder on stars and the
Bright moon. Why the stars twinkle? Is this their
    Joy or drops of tears, I wonder why moon is so shy why he wears robes 
white every night. I wonder life and death About 
friendship and love. Are my feelings as vast
And as deep as the skies? what am I? Just
Another entity or a world of my own?
Like a leaf in a huge tree
That is my entity
Tree is green
Happy and
Vast

24 comments:

  1. WoW! I'm so touched by the inspiration mention, dear AS :-) Thank you so much!

    This is absolutely B E A U T I F U L writing from start to finish with a lovely presentation to enchant our eyes with also! Bravo!

    I hope you continue trying new things in the journey of your wonderful writing! {|:-)

    P.S. ~ Thanks for making my day!

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  2. hii Fi!

    I am really thankful to you dear :)

    I m so happy that you liked it!

    :D

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  3. veera ranganath sagarFebruary 11, 2012

    excellent,

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  4. hii Veera

    thanks a lot!

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  5. Optimistic bright thoughts....

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  6. hii Alka

    nice to see u after long gap!

    thanks a lot!

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  7. beautiful poem writeup

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  8. hii Saru!

    thanks a ton!

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  9. awesome friend..keep up the good work buddy:)

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  10. hii Ramesh,

    thanks a lot!!

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  11. hi Rahul,

    thanks a lot!

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  12. Any news about A defector's unexplainable disappearance?

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  13. hiii Anon

    was a bit caught up :)

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  14. hiii..where r u? long time no c..cheers n wishes

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  15. wonder..!!
    and that makes us more human

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  16. hii deeps!

    thanks!

    i think so :)

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