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Wednesday, September 14, 2016

Some Stories...


There was once a boy in love with a lass
Whose smile was pretty, words were verse
One day she left without a hint or goodbye
His world pale and dismal turned the sky
His days darker and restless became nights
He left a part of himself and moved ahead
Incomplete and wrecked, a breathing gash


Some stories are not cute, no kisses no rain
They are made up of soreness, hurt and pain
And some questions that always come along
Why did it all happen? What went so wrong?

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18 comments:

  1. Beautiful. Here I quote a Tamil poem.

    Kaalathin kolamadi
    Kadavul seitha kutramadi

    Well played by fate
    Crime committed by God


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    1. Hi SG

      Thanks a lot! These lines are so lovely, thanks for sharing

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  2. 'There was once a girl'... It hurts... Beautifully written *smiles*

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  3. Some stories are not cute...true..how are you friend?

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    1. Hi UA

      True, some are more than ugly.

      Nice to see you after a long time. I ma fine, how are you?

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  4. OMG! I had written something similar few days before... Not sure when it is scheduled for... But really a touchy one... And a bitter realty faced by almost all relationships these days!

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    1. Hi Loco

      Thanks! I am glad you liked it! I would love to read yours, do post soon!
      Indeed, relationships are brittle these days.

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  5. We do wonder - what went wrong? I wish all stories have a happy ending.

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    1. Hi Saru

      yes, I wish the same too

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