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Tuesday, September 23, 2014

Haiku Horizons- Space

This is for Haiku Horizons and this week's prompt is 'Space'



Dissolve in my beats, and
Into the spaces amid my lips
Calm the tempest within
Urban beast savors
Open space, sacrificed
On concrete altars  




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22 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2014

    Great set of images here! I especially like concrete altars (the image, not the reality)

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    1. Ankita September 23, 2014

      Hi Oneofaclass

      Thanks a ton! I am really that you enjoyed the Haiku :)

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  2. payal agarwalSeptember 23, 2014

    powerful emotions..

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  3. KatrinSeptember 23, 2014

    You are such a great writer, Ankita! <3 Thanks for sharing!

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 24, 2014

    sacrificed on concrete altars is quite a powerful image ----

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  5. LocomenteSeptember 25, 2014

    Brilliant!

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  6. MeghaSeptember 25, 2014

    Both the haiku r way diff from each other.. But both are equally nice..

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  7. Amrit SinhaSeptember 27, 2014

    The first two lines ... just wow :D

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  8. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 28, 2014

    Those concrete altars are quite voracious, aren't they?

    Desolate Space

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 28, 2014

    Wow! Powerful imagery. Nice work.

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  10. BikramSeptember 29, 2014

    true so true concrete jungles are coming up everywhere ...

    Bikram

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  11. संजय भास्‍कर September 29, 2014

    it is a beautiful

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