This is for Haiku Horizons and this week's prompt is 'Train'
Train’s
parting whistle
Oh!
Turn at least once, pleads my heart
No!
Can't be our last goodbye
No
joys and no cries
A
stoned heart does not feel
Trains
of past pass quietly
- Image from shardsofsilence.wordpress.com
- Haiku based on 5-7-5 syllable pattern
Brought a few painful memories back.
ReplyDeleteHi Red
Deleteit happens sometimes...
Those last good-byes are hard to handle...
ReplyDeleteTrain for All Seasons
Hi MMT
Deletevery true...
The first pictured the scene.Both are nice.
ReplyDeleteHello KP Sir
DeleteThanks a lot!
:D
Awww!
ReplyDeleteHi Alka
DeleteThanks!
trains of unforgiven past, bring much pain to joyful heart.
ReplyDeleteHi Payal
Deleteyes, rightly said :)
Poignant yet beautiful. Well done Ankita! :*
ReplyDeleteJust one little thing.. try to compress words in 5-7-5 syllables. :)
Hi Mirage
DeleteThanks a ton dear :)
Ya sure, I'll take care in future :)
Beautifully written and very touching! Thanks for sharing, Ankita!
ReplyDeleteHi Katrin
DeleteVielen danke!!
:D
Last goodbyes are painful.
ReplyDeleteHi Amrit
Deleteyes, very painful
They always do..
ReplyDeleteNice one!
Hi Locomente
DeleteThank you!!
Well written Ankita.. last goodbyes and trains of past do bring some bitter sweet memories back.. :)
ReplyDeleteHi Megha
DeleteThanks a ton dear :)
yes, indeed!
Beautiful. Both of them !!
ReplyDeleteHi Jyotsna
DeleteThanks a lot!
:D
i wish i can turn the clock back .. this brought some memories
ReplyDeleteBikram
Hi Bikram
DeleteThank you! I am happy this post touched your heart :)
love the twist in the comclusind lines!
ReplyDeleteHi Vandana
DeleteThanks a lot! :)