Vanity dripping and spine erect
Head high, I gape at my body perfect
Oh! I love my silken skin, such golden glow
My sea blue eyes and feline walk slow
Praise showered galore wherever I go
Each minute filled with a cheer anew!
Thus, I beg almighty to freeze the time
Can’t just let go youth golden of mine
May this shine of gifted allure never fade
Amen. I hope my pleadings reach His space
One nice day, when sun heads earth’s rim
When after the usual pleading, I saw ‘him’
He sat quietly on a wooden porch
Near the place where I beg to my god
His hair rugged and looks so rustic
Surely, those eyes did master some magic
On a mere leaf he eats and prays all day
His words too, cast a spell they say
Near he came and opened his pursed lips
I melted and got confined to his jinx
He said, “Lovely body is but a delusion
Soul is truth we are to fathom
From the time of arrival until we depart
This molded dust forms just a part
We all become one in the end
For death unites us once again
Burned to ashes by our own friends
For none escorts after a life ends
Change is truth; the essence of life
Embrace lovingly, for it only survives
Do chart your path but rise above the jumble
Barter desires for the joy of surrender”
All this was very true and right
And I did come from darkness to light
However, I never saw him after that day
Was he God himself in a body of clay?
(Images from Internet)
Awesome! :)
ReplyDelete"Barter desires for the joy of surrender" sums up the message.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful poem.
What a beautiful and profound work!
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I love ur poems too!
Wonderful writing, A S! Such beauty, rhythm and depth! Loved it :)
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hii Fiona,
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I am so happy that u like it!
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yaa, was keeping a bit busy :)
beautiful, passionate and profound :)
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Lovely words!
ReplyDeletevery nice poem.. nicely woven words.
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Wonderful conversation!
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Blasphemous Aesthete
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ya, I too missed my blog badly so m back!
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btw where have u been? long tym no c?
beautiful poem
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super yar..v were just discussing over tea how "letting go" of things bring us joy...and here i see your wonderful post..keep the show going buddy and stay connected..:)
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thanks a lot!!
Wow. Deep. :)
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Lovely and wise!
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This was a beautiful story. I enjoyed reading it.
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Very well written!!
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btw, where have u disappeared these dayz ??
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superb!!! too good!!!
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beautiful poem, i love your poems, lovely thoughts,.
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Coming to say hello and give my comment here an update *he he* to Brilliant!!!
ReplyDeleteSome things are even better the second time around! Looking forward to an update soon and I hope you try your hand at many forms of poetry because the hand that holds your pen is golden :-)
What an honor to be on your blog roll! Thank you very much! :-)
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THANK YOU Fi! ur compliment is really huge indeed!!
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gud expatiation of one of the most primoridial human longing for eternal,flawless youth.
ReplyDeleteThrought the ages almost all hitherto civilizations have tales of the perpetual elixir of life-the fountain of eternal youth,be it in the hilly meanderings of the himalyas or the distant magical land El-dorado or the supposed home of fairies-the mighty caucasus.
The quest for beauty and youth is as enchanting and appealing as it must be in earlier times and offers a recluse from the mundane life,acts as a symphony amidst cacaphony of urban life and dwellings.
Plz look forward to get ur work published,u deserve that and even more sis
Regards
Ivan Drago
hii Ivan
ReplyDeletethanks a lot.I am glad u liked the poem :)