“Don’t stare like that” she blushed
“Girl, I often feel like…” he said
“Like?”
“Coming closer to you and to hold those manes in my
hands …” he added, staring intensely in her curious eyes
“And?” she beamed
“To pull you even closer!”
“Then?”
“Then…bang your head against the wall, you irritating creep!”
he screamed!
oops!! what a surprise for her!!
ReplyDeleteHi Vandana
Deletehehe! yess!
Well, that escalated quickly!
ReplyDeleteHi Blogoratti
Deleteyes! lol :)
creepy guy... :P
ReplyDeleteHi Megha
Deletehahah! Annoying girl drove the guy to creepiness!
Good one! :))
ReplyDeleteHi Katrin
DeleteThanks a lot! :)
The guy lost his cool too quick ! Well his temperament will not suit the girl !
ReplyDeleteHello Sir,
DeleteActually the girl is a pest so that's why this ending :)
Hahaha .. too romantic :P
ReplyDeleteHi Ankur
Deleteheheh! :P
An unexpected twist!!
ReplyDeleteHello nana
Deletehehe! :)
You took us by surprise..very well etched, Ankita:)
ReplyDeleteVishal
Hi Vishal
DeleteThanks a lot! I am happy you enjoyed it :)
You spoiled a romantic ending. HaHaHa.
ReplyDeleteHi SG
Deletehahahah! lol!
Ouch!
ReplyDeleteSome people actually do this, Ankita.
Hope we all get loving partners, who'll never even dream of banging our heads!
Hi Anita
Deleteheheh! some do and some partners are such pests that they drive the other person to the wall! in this fic, the girl is one such creep :)
That was a surprise, I was not expecting that to happen! ;)
ReplyDeletexoxoxo ♡
Hi Dianne
DeleteThanks a lot dear! hehe! :)
<3
No... poor girl...
ReplyDeletebut sweet nagging can at times be a complete torture!
Hi Rupasi
Deleteyes, nagging can drive the other person crazy!
Ooops ooops ... have some patience :p
ReplyDeleteHi Amrit
Deletehehe! yeah!
very interesting
ReplyDeleteHi Onkar
DeleteThanks a lot! :)
The guy definitely needs his head checked up ;(
ReplyDeleteHi Rajesh
Deletehehe yes :)
I kinda expected the twist. Relieved that I wasn't disappointed. I like it. :-)
ReplyDeleteHi Kanthu
Deletehehe! thanks! :)
ouch.. good twist :)
ReplyDeleteHi Rat
Deletehehe! :)
hahaha good one dear..
ReplyDeleteHi Ramesh
DeleteThanks dear :)
Lol!
ReplyDeleteHi Jeevan
Deleteheheh!
:)
OMG! What was that... I actually felt he was some psychopath, because I was reading those lines just too intensely :)) LOLZ
ReplyDeleteHi Shesha
DeleteThanks a lot! That is to be interpreted diff by diff people :)
Hahahah..!!! Lol.. what a hilarious end it is..!!!
ReplyDeleteAwesome you are Ankita :)
Cheers
Hi Geetika
Deleteheheheh! Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed the post!
Thanks again :D
Gosh! Didn't see that coming! Brilliant and hilarious post :D
ReplyDeleteHi Swathi
Deleteheheh! Thanks a lot! I am glad you liked it :D
Nice climax. Was expecting smthg romantic :D
ReplyDeleteHi Sonali
DeleteThanks a lot! I am happy you liked it :D
Scary to say the least
DeleteGeetashree
heheh! thanks!
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