He
moved his admiring gaze all over the contours wondering over the beauty nothing
less than heavenly. He stared for some time, defying his urge to touch and feel
those curves that drove him crazy. When he could no longer resist, he just went
ahead and asked the price of that lovely conch for sale!
PS-
I just love conches and seriously, some are just so beautiful that they literally
leave you astounded! One of my acquaintances has a huge real conch that steals
all the praise from other show pieces adoring her hall!
A 55W fiction,it has all the elements of a good story with a twist at the end.
ReplyDeleteWhy don't you give an image that it is 55W Fiction as you can see in my blog?
Hello Nana
Deletethanks a lot! I am happy you liked the post!
No, because I like it this way.
A tease... Good one at that ;)
ReplyDeleteHi Rajesh
Deletehehe! thanks a lot! :)
Twist in tale conveyed in so less words...
ReplyDeleteVery well written!
Hi Loco
DeleteThanks a ton!! I am really glad you enjoyed the post :)
Sounded like a beautiful girl turned to be a lovely conch ! You have the makings of a suspense writer !
ReplyDeleteHello Sir
Deleteheheh! I am happy you liked the twist!
Thank youuu! :D
Beautiful twist and well written! I too love conches and have some collections too :)
ReplyDeleteHi Umamaheshwari
DeleteThanks a lot!! that's great, do share some pics with us :)
hehe, that's a good one! :)
ReplyDeleteHi Katrin
DeleteThanks a lot maine lieben :)
hahahaha! Nice one :D
ReplyDeletei love me some conches too!
Hi Rupasi
Deletehahah! Thank you :D
Nice! I love them too!
hahahaha 55 words of twists indeed! :)
ReplyDeleteHi Anil
Deletehehe! thanks a lot!
hehehehe.....I had something else in mind. YOU EVIL YOU.:P
ReplyDeleteHi Red
Deletehahahah! yeahh I knew ;D
:-) Good one !
ReplyDeleteHi Radha
Deleteheheh! thank you :)
This is cheating :P :P
ReplyDeleteloved it btw :D
Hi Ankur
Deletehehehe! I am so happy you enjoyed it :D
he he he he YES I can FEEL it .. as I did the same a few years time when I had gone to india to PURI.. I bought a conch .. have blown it a few times now
ReplyDeleteBikram's
Hi Bikram
Deleteheheh! yes, conches are just so amazing :)
I love conches too.
ReplyDeleteCleverly expressed, Ankita!
Hi Anita
Deleteyes! same pinch :)
Thanks a lot :)