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Friday, October 24, 2014

Haiku Horizons- Release


This is for Haiku Horizons and this week's prompt is 'Release' 


Hungry waves guzzle
Letters grimy with deceit
Old pain released.



Rustic cage opened
Dismal eyes glitter in hope
Released wings cheer!


*Image from: www.pixgood.com
*5-7-5 syllable pattern


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21 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaOctober 25, 2014

    The release wings will cheer always :-)

    But how can we ever cope up with deceit :-(

    Loved both the haiku.

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    1. Ankita October 25, 2014

      Hi Amrit

      Yes, freedom is the most precious thing!

      but we have to, we can't live with -vity all life.

      Thanks a ton!!

      :)

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  2. Jyotsna BhatiaOctober 25, 2014

    Beautiful. Loved the first one more :)

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  3. AnonymousOctober 25, 2014

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  4. Anita SabatOctober 25, 2014

    Two different types of releases.
    Nice ones, Ankita!

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    1. Ankita October 26, 2014

      Hi Anita

      Thanks a lot! I am really glad you liked them!

      :)

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  5. Sai CharanOctober 26, 2014

    The last line is the best, released wings are a sign for beautiful life full of freedom!! :)

    All the best Ankita,
    Take care :)

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    1. Ankita October 26, 2014

      Hi Sai

      Thanks a lot! I am happy that you liked the lines :)


      Thanks!

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  6. KatrinOctober 26, 2014

    Love them! Thanks for sharing!

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    1. Ankita October 26, 2014

      Hi Katrin

      Thanks a lot! I am really glad you enjoyed the Haiku :)

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  7. Vaga BondOctober 26, 2014

    liked the expression 'letters grimy with deceit'... 2 good 'releases' !! ;)

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  8. Ankita October 26, 2014

    Hi Vaga

    so ur r back from Himalaya trip! how was it?? Do post some awesome pics!

    Thanks a lot! I am glad that you enjoyed the haiku :)

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  9. Red HandedOctober 26, 2014

    I loved it....the last line was so beautiful.

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  10. SoumyaOctober 26, 2014

    They paint such a pretty picture both the verses :)

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    1. Ankita October 26, 2014

      Hi Soumya

      Thanks a ton! I am happy that you liked the Haiku :)

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  11. LocomenteOctober 26, 2014

    Both the haiku are lovely.
    About pain and freedom from it...
    Nice

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    1. Ankita October 26, 2014

      Hi Locomente

      Thanks a ton! I am really glad you liked both :D

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  12. UnknownNovember 03, 2014

    Very nicely framed.

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    1. Ankita November 03, 2014

      Hello Maam

      Thanks a lot! I am really glad you liked them :)

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