Presented below is
a 'Villanelle' or 'Villanesque' which is a nineteen-line poetic form
consisting of five tercets followed by a quatrain. There are two refrains and
two repeating rhymes, with the first and third line of the first tercet
repeated alternately until the last stanza, which includes both repeated lines.
Read more here.
I am very thankful to K Parthasarthi Sir for his motivation and guidance.
I am very thankful to K Parthasarthi Sir for his motivation and guidance.
Do Return My Dear
Like rosy spring, do return my dear
You make heavens smile upon me
I shall await you till the next
year
Your whisperings all day I hear
In twinkling stars, your face I see
Like rosy spring, do return my dear
I sense storm hidden in skies clear
Igniting are the cold waves of sea
I shall await you till the next
year
But this cruel fate is what I fear
Still I have set you, my love, free
Like rosy spring, do return my dear
The pangs of love often appear
So blissful is this insanity, I
agree
I shall await you till the next
year
No other desires are left, I swear
As our lives are tied by His decree
Like rosy spring, do return my dear
I shall await you till the next
year
Nicely written. Actually I don't know dat there was something called vinnalelle till I read the poem
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DeleteThanks a lot! is it! nice :)
It's beautiful, longings has million expressions.
ReplyDeleteHi Saru
DeleteThanks a lot! yes, very true :)
Longing*
ReplyDeleteCame to know about a new poetry form...
ReplyDeleteAnd you have done a great job!!!
Hi Locomente
Deletethanks a lot! I am really happy that you enjoyed this :)
This is beautiful ... a subtle soothingness in this piece :-)
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You really are a great writer, Ankita! Enjoy your weekend!
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DeleteThanks a lot dear! :D
Thanks and have a happy weekend too!
Aw. That's so sweet. :)
ReplyDeleteHi SuperLux
DeleteThanks a lot! I am really glad you liked it :)
This is such a beautifully penned poem Ankita!
ReplyDeleteHi Ruby
DeleteThanks a ton!! I am really happy you liked it :)
Beautiful lines
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DeleteThanks a lot :)