This is inspired by Princess Fiona's works. Thanks Fi for motivating me to try something really creative like this!
Vast
Space filled
Universe, I wonder
If I am , a part of the
Ever flowing river; sitting in
My own reverie, I ponder on stars and the
Bright moon. Why the stars twinkle? Is this their
Joy or drops of tears, I wonder why moon is so shy why he wears robes
white every night. I wonder life and death About
friendship and love. Are my feelings as vast
white every night. I wonder life and death About
friendship and love. Are my feelings as vast
And as deep as the skies? what am I? Just
Another entity or a world of my own?
Like a leaf in a huge tree
That is my entity
Tree is green
Happy and
Vast
WoW! I'm so touched by the inspiration mention, dear AS :-) Thank you so much!
ReplyDeleteThis is absolutely B E A U T I F U L writing from start to finish with a lovely presentation to enchant our eyes with also! Bravo!
I hope you continue trying new things in the journey of your wonderful writing! {|:-)
P.S. ~ Thanks for making my day!
hii Fi!
ReplyDeleteI am really thankful to you dear :)
I m so happy that you liked it!
:D
excellent,
ReplyDeletehii Veera
ReplyDeletethanks a lot!
Optimistic bright thoughts....
ReplyDeletehii Alka
ReplyDeletenice to see u after long gap!
thanks a lot!
beautiful poem writeup
ReplyDeletehii sm
ReplyDeletethanks a lot!
hii Saru!
ReplyDeletethanks a ton!
awesome friend..keep up the good work buddy:)
ReplyDeletehii Ramesh,
ReplyDeletethanks a lot!!
Lovely, AS
ReplyDeletehi Rahul,
ReplyDeletethanks a lot!
Lovely words!
ReplyDeletehii Fi!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot!
Any news about A defector's unexplainable disappearance?
ReplyDeletehiii Anon
ReplyDeletewas a bit caught up :)
hiii..where r u? long time no c..cheers n wishes
ReplyDeleteHI BOSS:)
ReplyDeleteHI BOSS:)
ReplyDeletehello!
ReplyDelete:)
wonder..!!
ReplyDeleteand that makes us more human
hii deeps!
ReplyDeletethanks!
i think so :)