Stuck in my own cobwebs,
(This is written for a superstar of Indian Cinema, whose insolence, rudeness and arrogance shocked me. Stars like him, once shining, are now lost in history, for space at the top is narrow and pitch very slippery. Nothing lasts forever, as the saying goes, ‘This too shall pass’. I hope this hero gets this lesson soon)
Within the nooks deep in my heart;
I am unable to break free and make a new start,
Even sunlight seems mere shadow of a once glorious past.
Only the darkness now rules in life’s lonely lane,
With a few dusted memories,
Of joy, of celebration, of bliss, of fame;
I am now a deserted address, no letters for this forgotten name.
My lonesome heart yearns for those friends,
To wipe my tears and hold these shaking hands,
But world bows only to the rising sun;
The fallen stars are dirt for every one.
(This is written for a superstar of Indian Cinema, whose insolence, rudeness and arrogance shocked me. Stars like him, once shining, are now lost in history, for space at the top is narrow and pitch very slippery. Nothing lasts forever, as the saying goes, ‘This too shall pass’. I hope this hero gets this lesson soon)
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who are u talking abt?
ReplyDeletevery nice..lovely words...
ReplyDeleteI hope its not RAJESH KHANNA...
So apt..but who is this?
ReplyDeleteThose who left were never friends, but yes, sometimes we push them away.
ReplyDeleteInteresting verse... but too good to waste on a rude, insolent person... for whoever that is.. just the following shud be apt...
ReplyDeleteLife Sucks.. Life Sucks.. Then you die :P
A very nice verse.. very touching.. and in the end.. THIS TOO SHALL PASS!! Too good!!
Beautifully written but who who?
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no not him
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love the title,
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Love your poetry talent and looking forward to a profound experience with your input.
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I like the title of your blog.. Humming Words. :) It's striking.
ReplyDeleteThis poem reminds me so much of being-abandoned feelings.
'Unable to break free and make a new start.' - Although you have written this in a different context, I think it suits better to a different state of mind.. loneliness.
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The best line of the poem:
ReplyDeleteI am now a deserted address, no letters for this forgotten name.
Good one...!!
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Who is the person? Well-penned :)
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