Since poor and illiterate, they wondered why their anemic teenage daughter fainted frequently.
Thus they went to a famous ‘tantrik baba’ who announced she was possessed.Baba took their semi-conscious daughter to a dark room for ‘treatment’. They were relieved that the evil spirit was gone.
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But only she knew what else she had lost.....
This one is the best of them all!
ReplyDeletehii Abhinav!
ReplyDeletethanks a ton buddy!
this is well said and well written.
ReplyDeletenow yu going gooood!!..cya around..wher yu these days
ReplyDelete@ AS
ReplyDelete55 words speaking so well and so much!
Great attempt in drawing our attention to a very cunning act of the society's dirty superstition!
Keep the spark Alive..
Good one!!
ReplyDeletehii Sorcerer :)
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hii Rachana
ReplyDeleteya yaar! this is very common in rural India, its a dirty reality...only education and awareness can bring a positive change :)
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awesome!!!
ReplyDeleteThat was eerily stirring.
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nice.. :)
ReplyDeletehiii Jagjit!
ReplyDeletethanks buddy!
where r u these dayz??
A.S,
ReplyDeleteBecoming better post by post !! Good one :). and,on a social subject too.
Btw, are the last lines included in the fiction post ?
hii Prashant
ReplyDeletethanks a lot buddy! yaa! just tried .... m so glad u liked it :)
yaa! last line is the crux..
Superstition & Child molestation...bah..two intense topics to cover in a small fiction...good read A S :)
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thanks a lot :)