That hall was clumsy. Elderly people everywhere, like discarded and rusted tools that were once sharp and shiny. Son again convinced the father about their shifting together to village for which the father sold off his property. Outside, with cool breath and a fat cheque, son passionately kissed the letter which read ‘permanent immigration granted’.
good one this was... :)
ReplyDeletehii G3
ReplyDeletethanks a lot!
ya, it happens yaar, this is the sad reality :(
If a father can't find happiness in his son's happiness, then he is being selfish.
ReplyDeletehii Sankoobaba
ReplyDeletenoo! here the son is ditching his father. after making the father sell off the property, the son is leaving the father in an old age home to settle abroad.
Oh no!!! So sad, yet so true
ReplyDeleteyup sis!
ReplyDeletesad reality :(
WOW,
ReplyDeleteThat's a really good one.
MMMmmmm....Creativity is in the air. :)
hii Sunil!
ReplyDeletethanks buddy!
MMMMmmmmm....yups!
;D
hmm very true and sad yeah!
ReplyDeletehope to cya around
HaRy
hii Hary!
ReplyDeleteyup! true and sad too :(
56 words hain! :D
ReplyDeletehehe... why only 55? why not 44? 66 ??
nice!! D
hii Abhinav
ReplyDelete55 hain poore! :D
wo aisa hai ki 55 words ka shagun hai!
;D
This one is splendid!
ReplyDeleteand you put the feelings of that family in 55 words..amazin work!
hi Sorcerer
ReplyDeletethanks a lot :)