You
left me behind like
A
snake that sheds its skin
To
move ahead callously
Crawling
to a new hole
A
new terrain, a new prey
While
I lay kaput like a diadem
Crushed
under enemy’s wagon
Like
a sad note, half discernible
Coming
from a broken violin
Like
that mild reek that springs
From
stale forgotten bouquets
I
was your skin once, intimate and attached
Now,
I am mere an object of odd curiosity
Of
strangers with greed gleaming in ice cold eyes,
All
bitter gazes and silent taunts that rip as a knife
I
know, I know Love, that I will be loved by none
But
I also know, I understand that you are a snake
Indeed
one…
Interesting perspective on love/relationship!
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Hi DPIRS Mysore
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What an awesome poetry. I can't find the words to describe this but I think awesome would suffice for now.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. Your poem shows the real world.
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Nice poem
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Expressed well...
ReplyDeleteHi Angel
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I have never read the comparison of the person who has been left behind in the way you have described. Well written :)
ReplyDeleteHi Jyotsna
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awesome nice post with poem
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Great one and what a comparison!
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