There was once a boy in love with a
lass
Whose smile was pretty, words were
verse
One day she left without a hint or
goodbye
His world pale and dismal turned
the sky
His days darker and restless became
nights
He left a part of himself and moved
ahead
Incomplete and wrecked, a breathing
gash
Some stories are not cute, no kisses
no rain
They are made up of soreness, hurt
and pain
And some questions that always come
along
Why did it all happen? What went so
wrong?
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Beautiful. Here I quote a Tamil poem.
ReplyDeleteKaalathin kolamadi
Kadavul seitha kutramadi
Well played by fate
Crime committed by God
Hi SG
DeleteThanks a lot! These lines are so lovely, thanks for sharing
I liked the last para !
ReplyDeleteHi Shilpa
DeleteThanks a lot!
Right to the heart
ReplyDelete'There was once a girl'... It hurts... Beautifully written *smiles*
ReplyDeleteHi Shadow
DeleteThanks a lot! :)
Some stories are not cute...true..how are you friend?
ReplyDeleteHi UA
DeleteTrue, some are more than ugly.
Nice to see you after a long time. I ma fine, how are you?
wow, such touching lines!!!
ReplyDeleteHi SE
DeleteThanks a lot!
beautiful lines
ReplyDeleteHi Onkar
DeleteThanks a lot!
OMG! I had written something similar few days before... Not sure when it is scheduled for... But really a touchy one... And a bitter realty faced by almost all relationships these days!
ReplyDeleteHi Loco
DeleteThanks! I am glad you liked it! I would love to read yours, do post soon!
Indeed, relationships are brittle these days.
We do wonder - what went wrong? I wish all stories have a happy ending.
ReplyDeleteHi Saru
Deleteyes, I wish the same too
This is so well written!
ReplyDeleteHi Pooja
DeleteThanks a lot!! :)