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Wednesday, April 1, 2015

Fire

You were frosty winter
Frozen, inert and pale
Till I peered and saw
The flames in your eyes
The fire in your breath

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32 comments:

  1. LocomenteApril 01, 2015

    Very nice... In love with ur choice of words...

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    1. Ankita April 01, 2015

      Hi Loco

      Thanks a lot! That is such a lovely compliment :D

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  2. SoumyaApril 01, 2015

    Ohh!! This was so powerful! :)

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  3. SGApril 01, 2015

    Beautiful.

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  4. KatrinApril 01, 2015

    That's so good, Ankita!

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  5. KParthasarathiApril 01, 2015

    It lends itself to many interpretations.Very nicely written.

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    1. Ankita April 02, 2015

      Hello Nana


      Thanks a lot! That is a nice compliment! :)

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  6. Camila Rafaela FelippiApril 01, 2015

    Baking!

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  7. RamakrishnanApril 01, 2015

    Beautiful !

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  8. JeevanApril 03, 2015

    Fantastic compo Ankita :)

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    1. Ankita April 03, 2015

      Hi Jeevan

      Thanks a lot ! I am happy you liked it :)

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  9. Shesha ChaturvediApril 03, 2015

    I loved these lines... Beautifully penned Ankita! :)

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    1. Ankita April 03, 2015

      Hi Shesha

      Thanks a lot! I am really so glad that you liked these lines :)

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  10. Amrit SinhaApril 04, 2015

    This is one of your best ... magical, powerful and full of passion.

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    1. Ankita April 04, 2015

      Hi Amrit

      Thanks a ton for the awesome compliment :D :D

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  11. Ankur AnandApril 04, 2015

    nice choices of words :)

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  12. Swathi ShenoyApril 05, 2015

    Nice choice of words Ankita :) Loved it :)

    Double Jeopardy

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  13. vanderloostApril 07, 2015

    Very impassioned words

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  14. ShadowApril 08, 2015

    Perfect. SO much more here than just a season...

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    1. Ankita April 08, 2015

      Hi Shadow

      Thanks a lot!! I am glad you liked it :)

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  15. Vandana SharmaApril 09, 2015

    Deep down emotions are something else, the real heart has something else to say and on the top everything seems so calm.

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  16. BlogorattiApril 09, 2015

    That I thought...was beautiful!

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