Seize me in thy dark embrace
No
more stay an enigma to me
Grant
thy black kiss on my face
With
much heart love I did chase
But
only mirage was could I see
Seize
me in thy dark embrace
Mirror
reflects my dreary maze
Desire
I to be of this mess free
Grant
thy black kiss on my face
With anxious heart, count I days
To
be a leaf detached from tree
Seize
me in thy dark embrace
I
wish to melt away in vast space
In
the search of my own spree
Grant
thy black kiss on my face
Freeze
me death; leave no trace
Please
be kind to my small plea
Seize
me in thy dark embrace
Grant
thy black kiss on my face
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Oh Ankita...will u believe it if i told you it sounds like a prayer to me. Yeah i cry out too many a times...but of course i am not a composer but i seek that freedom too.
ReplyDelete...melt away in the vast space. And probably find ...
great...loved the rhythm of the composition too. :)
Hi Shivani
DeleteThat seems more like a compliment but also makes me ponder upon the reason for your sadness. Thanks a lot for liking the poem :)
I discern a philosophical note in this lovely poem
ReplyDeleteThanks Nana! Of late I was wondering why have u stopped commenting on my posts
DeleteSad poignant beautiful. !
ReplyDeleteHello Sir,
DeleteThanks a lot! I am so glad that you liked the poem :)
Reminded me of Shakespeare!
ReplyDeleteHi Rupasi
DeleteWhattttt! That's a HUGE compliment!! many thanks :D :D
I think death isn't a penalty but freedom! Interesting poem and like more the way arrangement of words.
ReplyDeleteHi Jeevan
DeleteYes, that's true. Thanks a lot I am really happy that you like the poem :)
Beautiful poem. But very sad.
ReplyDelete(Just fyi: Black Kiss is a hardcore erotic American comic book limited series. It was very controversial due to explicit scenes.)
Hi SG
DeleteThanks a lot! yes, i agree, it is really gloomy.
OMG! I did not know that!
"I wish to melt away in the vast space in search of my own spree"
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
Hi Red
DeleteThanks a lot!!! :D
Beautifully written, Ankita!
ReplyDeleteHi Katrin
DeleteThanks a lot!! :D
but then in death we are all equal .. no difference
ReplyDeleteOthe amla de hone ne Navede
Kisse na teri ZAAT puchni ..
beautiful poem ..
Bikram's
Hi Bikram
Deletevery true..death is the real reunion :)
Striking and powerful ... I loved your metaphors :-)
ReplyDeleteHi Amrit
DeleteThanks a lot!! :D
I am really glad you liked it!
Beautiful imagery.
ReplyDeleteHi rudraprayaga
DeleteThanks a lot! I am so happy that you liked it!
Wow, its amazing!
ReplyDeleteHi thetwinsmommy
DeleteThanks a lot! I am so happy that you liked it :D
What was that! Amazingly brilliant :)
ReplyDeleteHi loco
DeleteThanks a lot! I am so happy that you liked it :D