The maze is eternal with roads galore
Deeper I gaze, sink I more
Simply an endless swim without a shore
Keep passion hidden and face stoned
For each one is wolf in angel’s robe
Not a soul can be trusted, nor can be loved
Still a million strings tie me to the web of world
Let me break all ropes and take a road straight
Still keeping safe spaces on both the ways
I sever all strings once I feel Thee
All cravings go numb and
Soul feels like a bird set free!
I soak His light and sleep deep inside
Lo! I am the new sprout in the womb of light
Pains and joys are trivial now
From a raging fire and flaming ember
Here I beam with the joy of surrender
I am but a clay with scent of Thee
Ah! I can be anything I wish to be
For I have broken those million strings and
Soul feels like a bird set free!
The last stanza is the most impressive of all. Poetic in many ways to me.
ReplyDeleteBreakaway!
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
hii Anshul
ReplyDeletethanks a lot! this is such a lovely compliment :D
Is the context about leaving this world? Sorry if my understanding is nowhere near it...:(
ReplyDeletehii mOhan
ReplyDeleteI have written it for Thee (god)
thats an angrezi bhajan! hee hee :D
I also thought you wrote it about God. Makes sense then too. :)
ReplyDeletehii Juxtapostion
ReplyDeletethanks a ton!
that was a very nice poem.. would take some time till the words sink in..
ReplyDeletehii Adithyasaravana
ReplyDeletethanks a ton!
:)
A standing Ovation for ths one... :)
ReplyDeletehii Pink Teddy
ReplyDeletethanks a lot!
:D
AS, I am in love with your poetry. I wonder why I couldn't read before - but I shall catch up soon with the rest of your excellent work.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing.
hii Punam
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton!!
thats a very huge compliment :)
keep coming!!