Like an oasis in the desert
Like cool breeze in hot summers
Like a thousand roses in full bloom
Like a swish of sweet perfume
Like a pure drop of dew
Like a flower bud new
Like innocent chirping of birds
Like tiny bells of cattle heard
Are my innocent feelings for you
For pure love gives life a rosy hue!
(I wrote this poem long back but I am posting it now)
Wonderful...
ReplyDeleteits a lovely poem..keep writing!!
:)
hii Harman
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keep coming :D
lovey-dovey .. sweet-sweet.. good one~
ReplyDeletehii Sankoobaba
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Lovely! I can almost visulaize everything... Love the thousand roses in full bloom. They are red - right?!
ReplyDeletehii NRI Girl
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yup, red indeed :)
keep coming :)
Swish of perfume- lovely lyric.
ReplyDeleteHello Jagdish
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Liked the poem and the image
ReplyDeleteare those Gebra's Sorry if i have spelt it wrong ...
Bikram's
Like, really beautiful! :)
ReplyDeletehii Saurav
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keep coming :D
hii Bikramjit
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keep coming :D
Nice Poem. It reflects something thats is Pure and rare.
ReplyDeleteHii Rahul
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love it.
ReplyDeletehii Jingle
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Nice, melodious and lyrical one.
ReplyDeleteHello Mr Jagdish bali
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Short, simple and sweet :)
ReplyDeletehii Sh@s
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:D
excellent post,,.
ReplyDeletehi Anon
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