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Friday, August 28, 2015

Shivers

Clinched fists defy that smile of yours
And your cheer veils a certain wrath
Behind those eyes, those sparkling ones
I can read some hushed up words
Unspoken but not unfathomed
They perch as grim clouds black,
Sending shivers down my back


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19 comments:

  1. Dr. Vandana SharmaAugust 28, 2015

    spooky......................................

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  2. RamakrishnanAugust 28, 2015

    Lovely poem Ankita ! Powerful meaningful and rhyming !

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    1. Ankita August 28, 2015

      Hello Sir,

      Thanks a lot! I am really glad you enjoyed it :)

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  3. KatrinAugust 28, 2015

    Wonderfully written, Ankita!

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    1. Ankita August 29, 2015

      Hi Katrin

      Thanks a ton mein lieben :)

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  4. SGAugust 28, 2015

    Nice poem. Very well written.

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  5. JeevanAugust 29, 2015

    Excellent!

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  6. vanderloostAugust 29, 2015

    Excellent...very lucidly portrayed

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    1. Ankita August 29, 2015

      Hi vanderloost

      Thanks a ton!! I am so happy that you liked the poem :)

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  7. Alok singhalAugust 29, 2015

    This is an amazing poem...short and sensational!

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  8. Ph_August 30, 2015

    Wow! Reminds me of the feelings I get if I ever get acquainted by someone who is either a stranger or does not keep good intentions towards me.

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    1. Ankita August 30, 2015

      Hi Ph_

      Thanks a lot! I am happy that you can relate with the poem :)

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  9. LocomenteSeptember 04, 2015

    This poem sent shivers within me too :)

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  10. AnonymousMarch 20, 2020

    each time i used to read smaller posts that as well clear their motive, and
    that is also happening with this paragraph which I am reading here.

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