Like a true companion
Your memoirs never leave me alone
However hard I may attempt
I witness circus* with a subtle contempt
I sauté in dark solitude
I burn out like a flame
I smile half-heartedly
I cease to think; everyone is the same
That fire within me is still ablaze
This lights my path in the entire maze
We will meet somewhere in high pastures
Where time does not prevail
Where life is but a passed stage
*world
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A moving piece that touches the heart
ReplyDeletehello Ravikar
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It happens.. Like this.. The wait itself is endless.. I like this poem..
ReplyDeleteI would come back to read it again..
hii KP
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:)
hii Adityasaravana
ReplyDeleteyes, u got it.
Thanks and yes do come :)
love is a wonderful thing.. joy in our heart it will bring !
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hii Rachit!
ReplyDeletewah wah :)
"Where life is but a passed stage".... Really can't wait till then... Loved the emotions. :)
ReplyDeletehii Juxta!
ReplyDeletethanks a ton!!
:D
very nice?
ReplyDeleteso where are we all meeting?
its such a touching piece of poem..
blended well and served with Nice Aroma
:)
two soul mates waiting to unite in the eternal world...what else should they care for...This is good...:)
ReplyDeletehii Harman!
ReplyDeletethanks a ton for this lovely comment :)
hii mohan
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beautifully expressed
ReplyDeletehii Rajlakshmi
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:D
Beautiful weave dear.
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ReplyDeletehello Alka
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hello Sankoobaba!
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hello Anon
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:)
we will meet..where time does not prevail...oooof...super yar..real good..and hey i also hope v real meet one day..insha allah..:) and thanks for being sucha good friend:)
ReplyDeletehii Ramesh
ReplyDeletethanks a ton for this lovely compliment :D
inshallah!
short n impressive....
ReplyDeleteMemories are always a true companion.
hello Irfannudin
ReplyDeleteyes, thanks a ton!
keeping that fir burning is half the battle won ...
ReplyDeleteexcellent loved reading it ..
Bikram's
hii Bikram
ReplyDeletethanks a lot for this lovely comment :)
Poetry always has the power of expressing something much much deeper with all the un-said words than it usually does with all the words which are actually present there.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Deep and Heavy are the words I would like to use for your expression here.
Sometimes the irony of life is too powerful to be won but hope and faith makes us do wonders in life. :)
Thanks for letting us read such nice hearts touching and emotion evoking lines.
Hello Asif,
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yes, that the wonder of verse..
keep coming :)
Very beautiful and touching poem. Each and every lines are superb.
ReplyDeletehii Babli!
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:)
lief is like that :)
ReplyDeletenice poem
hii Deeps
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thanks :)