What lies beneath, none can fathom
Deep within this heart rests my gold
Made up of a few memories moist
And a few secrets untold
A treasure of bitter and sweet tales,
And a few candid details
That I always wished to recite
Though could never gather that might
Lost under wraps are some faded figures too
And some names half forgotten
All lie shut and frozen,
Refusing to see the light
In a spirit dormant and brazen
But tables have turned; the tide has come,
To swallow this latent soul
To awake it from this deep sloom
To destroy the battered walls of gloom
Can’t stop this ebb at all
That got me into a bottomless hole
It is like a rebirth of my dead soul
Going inside never to come out
I see no darkness but only light
Of all lost hopes burning bright
Ah! I stumbled upon old ambitions also
These have accorded to sing in rhyme!
This is my world, my terrene
The holy abode of all once orphaned dreams
What am I without these yearnings?
That burn day and night
To give me light and to flicker forever
To pave my paths always and ever.
Very nice...optimistic.
ReplyDeleteamazing words...
ReplyDeletegood work..
esp. "Going inside never to come out
Or to grow again like a new born sprout"
well said!
very nice AS loved it.
ReplyDeletehii Alka
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:D
hii Sankoobaba
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:)
hii G3
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:)
I see no darkness but light of hope.
ReplyDeleteLiked it a lot. :)
hi Abhinav
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:D
Beautifully written :)
ReplyDeleteLoved the 2nd last stanza!
hii PhilO
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:)
Wonderful! You have a way with words. Beautifully articulated. Keep writing!
ReplyDeletehii Joseph
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:)
Thanks for commenting on my blog. shelbysperfectworld. It led me to read yours and I loved it.
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting on my blog. shelbysperfectworld. It led me to read yours and I loved it.
ReplyDeleteIt feels like some inner voice speaking to u.. really beautiful poem..
ReplyDeletehii Shelby
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:D
hii Unknown!!!
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yes may be :)
Thanks for your commenting at my blog.
ReplyDeleteIt's interesting, more of amazing and its good to an optimistic.
hii Rachit
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yeah :)
keep coming :)
Change one letter in this line and the poem goes into a totally different direction...
ReplyDelete"Deep within this heart rests my gold"
Good one! As you read again, you understand more...:)
hii Mohan
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thanks a lot!
Beautiful as ever ! No words left to speak about your talent with which you bring out your feelings into words like a flow river water.
ReplyDeleteLast six lines are the best. Really self motivating, positive and optimistic. :)
hii Asif,
ReplyDeletethanks a ton.its such a lovely compliment :)