Madam CM ji, please have some pity,
These lake sized holes and roads dirty
Make my little heart go down
Though envoy,I feel like a clown
Crime has taken a toll
Law & order both went for a stroll
It seems you are sleeping and snoring
While the Delhi
Please listen to our pleas
Ever since the Yamuna went crazy
A few hopes left now, seem hazy
Anyways, now you have a different case
Since the godsend rain has saved your face
Now you have got something to blame
And save your chair and your name.
But first please answer my question
You may even lose the election*
Which causes more destruction?
Nature or this deep set corruption?
(COMMENT BY SG ON THE FIRST VERSION. B'COZ OF SOME PROBLEM IN BLOGGER, I HAD TO REPOST IT)
ReplyDelete"Nice poem. The last stanza ended as a Tercet. Like others, I want to make it a Quatrain. Therefore, how about, a fourth line as follows:
You may even lose the election. "
Hii SG
ReplyDeletethanks a ton!
I have used that line
Delhi is really in apathetic condition. :(
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ReplyDeletethe 2nd stanza...is perfect..i dont think..it can be expressed any better way..
ReplyDeletenice poem..apt one at this moment..this should go to dailies..
Hi,
ReplyDeleteNice poem. Fully enjoyed throught while reading. :) The last line is intriguing.
hii My journey
ReplyDeletewelcome to my blog :)
thanks a lot!
keep coming :)
hii Unknown!!!
ReplyDeletethanks a lot buddy for this wonderful compliment :D
Its corruption!
ReplyDeleteNature foretells what it has in store most of the time.
Shera is in agony, and now I think, it is going to be a jugaad, but a letdown nevertheless.
hii BA
ReplyDeleteyups, it is corruption only.. i think its gonna be a letdown for sure :(
Thanks AS for stopping by. You have a wonderful blog here. I am going to follow you here.
ReplyDeleteCool! You addressed the whole issue through rhyme and rhythm! :)
ReplyDeletehii Shirazi
ReplyDeletewelcome here!
thanks a lot for this wonderful compliment :)
keep coming
hii DC
ReplyDeletewelcome here!
thanks a lot for this wonderful compliment :)
keep coming
it's evident you an artist but didn't knew Pen poems too...Shera Speaking,but who's listening?
ReplyDeletehii Rahul
ReplyDeletethanks!
yes govt suffers from selective dementia :P
hii Rahul
ReplyDeletethanks!
yes govt suffers from selective dementia :P
grt one.....the mute shera must be happy if he ever read this post.
ReplyDeletetruly it's ourselves causing damage to India's stand in the world
hii madrasi
ReplyDeletewelcome here!
thanks a ton!
Very nice One AS Liked reading it a lot ... a good way of addressing the whole issue...
ReplyDeleteI ma keeping fingers crossed for the CWG lets see what happens now
Dear Shera (A.S),
ReplyDeleteYou spoke the truth. The truth is visible to all except those whom we gave extra eyes and powers to see. It seems that the rise in political status reduces the eyesight.
The Emperor himself is weaving the invisible cloth this time. Manmohan has lost his spectacles.
This poem must be published in a daily newspaper.
Regards,
Ashutosh
hii Bikramjit
ReplyDeletethanks a lot! yups, who knows if god does a miracle and CWG go smoothly :P
hehe!!
hello Ashu bhaiyya
ReplyDeletethanks a lot for this wonderful comment :)
yes, govt is blind towards the needs of people.. :(
hey nice one. i really wonder if we'll be able to host the CWG impressively. let's see.
ReplyDeleteliked ur blog, following right away!
hii Anuradha
ReplyDeletewelcome to my blog :)
thanks a lot! yaa we can only hope.. leave it to god :P
keep coming :)
Very aptly expressed every Delhites rant. Phew..Delhi is in a mess these days. I second Unknown's suggestion that you should get this piece published in one of the dailies.
ReplyDeletelike the poem
ReplyDeletewell written
Law & order both went for a stroll
hii Sh@s
ReplyDeleteyes, delhi is in a pathetic state ans the govt just dont care :(
thanks a lot! I'try :)
hii sm
ReplyDeletethanks a lot! yes, crime is increasing like anything...murders and robberies in broad daylight have become common. surprisingly, robbers use bikes to kill and flee :P
Nice one! The other states aren't far behind! All from the same womb you see!:-)
ReplyDeletehii Vidya
ReplyDeletethanks!
yes right!
I am loving this weather.. always hated delhi in summers... and north campus looked nice in the rains :)
ReplyDeletehii Kanishk
ReplyDeleteyes delhi is pathetic in monsoons an summers :)
umm i meant it's nice in monsoons too though better in winters... but i don't know why is everyone hating the rains :S
ReplyDeletehii kanishk
ReplyDeletebecause rains create havoc in an unmaintained and over populated dilli
It reminds school days to me... and good that i don't work in delhi :)
ReplyDeletehii Kanishk
ReplyDeleteohkk good :)
Somehow it sounds too sweet, over the agony and frustration we feel over what hasn't happened, when the whole world expected it to happen!
ReplyDeletehii RGB
ReplyDeletewelcome here!
yes, i agree..hehe
thanks a lot, keep coming :)
nice one!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteDelhi is really in apathetic condition. :(
hii Bhupesh
ReplyDeletethanks! yes i agree :P
ha well...terrible isn't it, the way things are going :)
ReplyDeleteHi Vishesh
ReplyDeleteheheh! yes :P