tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post804194138607886331..comments2023-10-30T05:53:10.386-07:00Comments on HUMMING WORDS: The Blast - My First Short StoryAnkita http://www.blogger.com/profile/08423815874935620837noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-36161828021685307172011-10-12T00:19:44.669-07:002011-10-12T00:19:44.669-07:00hello Asif,
hehe! thanks a lot :D
Actually, I wa...hello Asif,<br /><br />hehe! thanks a lot :D<br /><br />Actually, I wanted to keep it short 'coz i thought pple will get bored reading longgg dialouges, that's why.<br /><br />yes, animals are so cute and innocent, i love them :)Ankita https://www.blogger.com/profile/08423815874935620837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-5906525655974482012011-10-12T00:16:53.188-07:002011-10-12T00:16:53.188-07:00Your first short story is as good as your first po...Your first short story is as good as your first poetry :). Unbelievably proficient in arresting the imagination of the reader!<br /><br />You really have a heart to bleed unsaid emotions and feelings.:)<br /><br />Seriously I felt that you should have elaborated it further.<br /><br />On a completely different note, being a lover of pets myself, I think pets love you more than you yourself can because they are the victims of Stockholm syndrome and whenever they get a glimpse of true love or compassion they start believing that they achieved the destiny of their life.Asifhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08547129183292607530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-20820146523303483452011-07-24T21:38:48.772-07:002011-07-24T21:38:48.772-07:00hii Anon
thanks a ton!hii Anon<br /><br />thanks a ton!Ankita https://www.blogger.com/profile/08423815874935620837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-23783413166785537042011-07-24T12:10:47.924-07:002011-07-24T12:10:47.924-07:00Hey, I just hopped over to your internet site via ...Hey, I just hopped over to your internet site via StumbleUpon. Not somthing I would usually read, but I liked your thoughts none the less. Thanks for generating some thing worth reading.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-28761077408029771912011-06-27T07:00:23.455-07:002011-06-27T07:00:23.455-07:00The way you narrate the dog's loneliness is he...The way you narrate the dog's loneliness is heartrending...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-64817750960394548242011-06-12T23:29:03.661-07:002011-06-12T23:29:03.661-07:00hii Happy Kitten
thanks a lot !!
keep coming :Dhii Happy Kitten<br /><br />thanks a lot !!<br /><br />keep coming :DAnkita https://www.blogger.com/profile/08423815874935620837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-29867137358856125072011-06-12T23:24:11.545-07:002011-06-12T23:24:11.545-07:00Wow! What a powerful story....
Hoping to read man...Wow! What a powerful story....<br /><br />Hoping to read many more...Happy Kittenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14406399936808407736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-71702702497098725452011-06-03T06:11:32.476-07:002011-06-03T06:11:32.476-07:00hii Stranger
thanks a ton! m really happy that u ...hii Stranger<br /><br />thanks a ton! m really happy that u got the true spirit of the story :)<br /><br />thanks! awaiting the poem :)Ankita https://www.blogger.com/profile/08423815874935620837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-80625394318658376862011-06-03T05:26:31.523-07:002011-06-03T05:26:31.523-07:00Splendid... sometimes God opens our eyes by making...Splendid... sometimes God opens our eyes by making us go through uncanny circumstances. <br /><br />Once my psychologist advised me " Never love or trust any one to the extend they can hurt you. Love all but love yourself more"<br /><br />Will post the Hindi/Punjabi of the Amrita Preetam soon..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-41178223857110014832011-05-20T08:43:29.926-07:002011-05-20T08:43:29.926-07:00hii Gayathri
thanks a lot yaar! this a very nice ...hii Gayathri<br /><br />thanks a lot yaar! this a very nice compliment indeed!Ankita https://www.blogger.com/profile/08423815874935620837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-57443393839246759502011-05-20T08:42:54.715-07:002011-05-20T08:42:54.715-07:00hii Sankoobaba!
thanks a ton!!hii Sankoobaba!<br /><br />thanks a ton!!Ankita https://www.blogger.com/profile/08423815874935620837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-15419732175998984072011-05-20T08:42:18.762-07:002011-05-20T08:42:18.762-07:00hii BA
thanks a lot!
:)hii BA<br /><br />thanks a lot!<br />:)Ankita https://www.blogger.com/profile/08423815874935620837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-91628626858092103012011-05-20T08:42:00.831-07:002011-05-20T08:42:00.831-07:00hii Punam
thanks a ton!hii Punam <br /><br />thanks a ton!Ankita https://www.blogger.com/profile/08423815874935620837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-10311755854827499252011-05-20T08:41:44.282-07:002011-05-20T08:41:44.282-07:00hey! mOhan!
thanks!
will tell u in detail abt th...hey! mOhan!<br /><br />thanks!<br /><br />will tell u in detail abt the story and inspiration :)Ankita https://www.blogger.com/profile/08423815874935620837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-4604463452402288412011-05-20T08:41:14.413-07:002011-05-20T08:41:14.413-07:00hii Rachit!
m so happy... thanks a lot for apprec...hii Rachit!<br /><br />m so happy... thanks a lot for appreciating :)Ankita https://www.blogger.com/profile/08423815874935620837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-88585275437525804402011-05-20T08:40:53.425-07:002011-05-20T08:40:53.425-07:00hii Shakti!
thanks re :Dhii Shakti!<br /><br />thanks re :DAnkita https://www.blogger.com/profile/08423815874935620837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-77068354880666214942011-05-20T07:45:31.686-07:002011-05-20T07:45:31.686-07:00Perfect start!Perfect start!Shakti_Shettyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15270297678564078294noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-49267616936782608872011-05-19T01:54:28.354-07:002011-05-19T01:54:28.354-07:00hey sm
thanks a ton!!hey sm<br /><br />thanks a ton!!AShttp://hummingwords.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-17424089681180619162011-05-16T10:08:51.025-07:002011-05-16T10:08:51.025-07:00Very well written AS...i could actually picturize ...Very well written AS...i could actually picturize whatever u wrote in my mind...gayathri vishwanathanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00883895855698328408noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-8918001538207013022011-05-15T09:57:43.935-07:002011-05-15T09:57:43.935-07:00entertainingentertainingsanket kamblihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07829670502377057494noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-40340407651299278092011-05-14T09:43:49.469-07:002011-05-14T09:43:49.469-07:00The only between the dog and her situations is tha...The only between the dog and her situations is that she is capable of taking a life changing decision, and the dog isn't. There's no love on the other side.<br /><br />Nice read.<br /><br />Cheers,<br />Blasphemous AestheteBlasphemous Aesthetehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16417596461540852006noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-7045946790224269662011-05-14T07:50:05.548-07:002011-05-14T07:50:05.548-07:00A tad bit filmy, but a very good attempt. I liked ...A tad bit filmy, but a very good attempt. I liked the connection you made between the abandoned dog and the lady of your story.Punamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00794029561273711202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-85112826641054219972011-05-14T07:33:49.025-07:002011-05-14T07:33:49.025-07:00For a first time writer, this has come out rather ...For a first time writer, this has come out rather good...You've tried to show how one small but significant incident has made a woman realize the hard truths about the man she loves...based on any real incident?<br /><br />Since I too have tried hands on a short story, I can imagine how much effort you'd have put on this. This is certainly a good attempt, but not your best as I feel they are yet to come...so keep them coming!!mOhanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13717647617810417986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7185150317618513209.post-72961314947115123582011-05-14T04:51:02.509-07:002011-05-14T04:51:02.509-07:00superb... splendid piece of work :)superb... splendid piece of work :)Rachithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09671194017987611900noreply@blogger.com